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' Modern Moses (For John Freeman) ... ' 45th Senryu

That One, Parts Red Sea This One … Now Points To Set Free Moses’ Poetry … - - - - - - - - Because Of Your Shining Faith-Light Day and Night Always On Truck-Drivin' Home On Highway (or) Space You Share God's Grace That Circle So Bright (Just Like MoonBee's Light - smile) God Bless You Moses MoonBee

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Date: 11/24/2009 3:06:00 AM

'Moses the Man of God (psalm 90)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/23/2009 9:14:00 PM

God bless YOU, MoonBee for writing such a fitting tribute to our spiritual leader here on the Soup. Moses is indeed a shining "faith-light" who brings comfort and shares God's grace with all of us. Terrific dedication. I like the image of him parting the Red Sea. Love it! Happy Thanksgiving, Carolyn

Marty Owens

Date: 11/23/2009 8:22:00 PM

Very nice...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty

John Freeman

Date: 11/23/2009 8:04:00 PM

Such an honor MoonBee, to have one besides myself who can see and flow together in the light of God's love. As Moses parted the Red Sea, maybe I can part the illusion of darkness, so other may see what I can see. Smile. Sincere, Love, Moses

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/23/2009 6:47:00 PM

Awesome tribute in Senryu to capture the "Moses" image.... I am sure He will be absolutely thrilled when he reads..... Awesome write sweet Moonbee...:JP]