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Loves Silhouette

At times deaths vale splits open and shadows weave in and out. Your presence dances past me gently kissing my forehead. Rushing air catches my breath and I am filled with peace as your silhouette passes by. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 11.08.2014 Nette Onclaud Contest Silhouette of a Heptagonet 7th

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/21/2014 8:58:00 PM

Catching up reading all the wonderful winners ...I love the poignant beauty you created, Brenda. Congrats!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/21/2014 11:04:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda

John Lawless

Date: 11/16/2014 5:08:00 PM

Excellent write Brenda, I think at times we all feel the subtle hint of guidance from those who have passed.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:20:00 PM

Thank you John

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/16/2014 10:01:00 AM

Brenda, stopping by again to say congratulations for your win on your poem. Hugs, Sanda

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:20:00 PM

Thank you Sandra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/15/2014 5:47:00 PM

mellow artwprd so profound,dr urma..vthank you for joining my contest and big congrats, Fredicryry8!.. hugggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:19:00 PM

Ok, thanks I guess.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/15/2014 7:41:00 AM

Nicely done, congrats on the win Brenda...huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:17:00 PM

Thanks Kayod5

Jan Allison

Date: 11/15/2014 7:14:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats brenda:-) hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:17:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/15/2014 12:07:00 AM

We all need that silhouette of someone special..could it be a loved one who is gone or God himself,or even somewhere who is srill here.Knowing someone cares bring comfort and peace.Some shadows wil always protect us.I love your penned beauty dear sweet lady.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:16:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine

Hija De La Luna

Date: 11/10/2014 7:39:00 AM

glad to have read this today, Brenda! great write!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Hija

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2014 7:05:00 AM

Shadowed presence of a loved one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 11/10/2014 5:21:00 AM

In other words, thoughts of our beloved ones are always with us, even when they lie dormant at the back of the mind. Time heals, but we do not forget. This is such a lovely write, Brenda...a 7 rating for you. Take care. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Paul

Sudha Chandra

Date: 11/10/2014 12:13:00 AM

Made for a great red Brenda,

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:53:00 AM

Thanks Sudha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2014 11:28:00 PM

wow, it is really cool how you thought outside the box for your entry. I love yours!!!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/9/2014 10:32:00 PM

Beautiful, Brenda. Loved ones that come to us as shadows from behind the vale...very haunting and awesome. Good luck in the contest. Fav, Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:55:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra.XO