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Love Sacrified

White Lacey Curtain blows Breath of life gone Empty faith Grows strong In man’s heart sacrifices paid Written by Lori McClure for Nette Onclaud "TURN ON THE LATERNE"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/9/2011 4:03:00 PM
great write to show where the light source comes from that shall never go out
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Date: 9/10/2011 10:13:00 AM
Lori, this was written beautifully and in beautiful style. It captures something beautiful about the picture, I like the expression. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/9/2011 10:23:00 AM
congrats on your win also!! I love all these lanternes....I relly like the way you posted your flowing poem.....like the painting!!
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Date: 9/8/2011 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Lori
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:11:00 PM
Congrats Lori on your fantastic win with this awesome Lanterne poetry luv..
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Date: 9/8/2011 2:06:00 PM
Excellent presentation here Lori!A great write.Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 9/8/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Lori
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:50:00 AM
great one, doris..congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Lori. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2011 5:00:00 AM
Lori congrats on your superb win..David
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:57:00 PM
VERY nice. I kind of saw that same idea when I saw the picture.
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