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life is like a flame as it grows it is very beautiful but when it dies down the moment is gone the ash is left which speaks of the memories but the next day th flame starts the cycle again.

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Date: 12/17/2011 11:09:00 AM
Wishing you Merry Holidays and happy New Year!!! Love is the flame as I see it Jesse. Congrats on an honorable verse. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/17/2011 4:11:00 AM
congratulations x
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Date: 12/16/2011 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jesse
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Date: 12/16/2011 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest Jesse. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:36:00 AM
"the flame starts the cycle again." great job Jesse, the flame of life never dies, and builds againg, Congrats on a worthy poe 3. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:40:00 PM
So true, Jesse. Congrats on a win with this fine analogy poem.
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Jesse Kaler
Date: 12/7/2011 6:16:00 PM
thanks 4 the comment Andrea
Date: 12/7/2011 2:18:00 PM
Very nice analogy Jesse. Congratulations
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Jesse Kaler
Date: 12/7/2011 6:17:00 PM
Thanks man and im glad people understand it
Date: 12/7/2011 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Jesse. Love, Carol
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Jesse Kaler
Date: 12/7/2011 6:18:00 PM
thank you carol you never dissapoint with comments
Date: 12/7/2011 12:38:00 PM
Jesse congrats on your win, life goes on..David
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Jesse Kaler
Date: 12/7/2011 6:18:00 PM
thank you dave and i hope i can win some more even honorable mentions are a tru honor
Date: 9/8/2011 2:29:00 PM
Will be one excellent poem after you read over it and do your corrections. Love, Carol
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Jesse Kaler
Date: 9/8/2011 4:05:00 PM
thanks 4 telling me it was not grammatically correct so i wouldn't make a fool of myself :)

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