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Life 2 ~ (Rhyme) Life is filled with so much joy and so much aching Always like the weather,like the clouds on the sky, we go changing Aiming for new directions where dreams sometimes may take us To all those new places filled of happiness and sometimes sadness One way or the other, we don't have a choice but to proceed,just to go Making the best that we are able to continue this show through As days passes us quickly by, with no hellos or goodbyes of any kind While we look miserable at the clocks and all the things we left far behind So much had taken place all those years that went so quick We can't bring those moments back , but, still we can hear their music, In our hearts and minds it is like it was then and when And in our heads will play it forever over and over and then till the end again! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 December,20,2014

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Date: 12/21/2014 7:51:00 PM
Dorian my sweet lady... you overwhelm me with the love in your soul! There are very few people I know that even come close! The introductory image. "Love is..." is so powerful, so true, yet so gentle! Your poetry totally resembles mine... it's like our hearts are somehow linked. Love you dear Lady Love XXX
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/23/2014 12:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Jack for your visit and all your kind comments. Much appreciated indeed my dear friend. Hope that you're more than ready for Christmas. Wish you all the best and your family! God bless you now and have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Date: 12/20/2014 5:21:00 PM
Dorian, just when I needed to know, thank you.
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Date: 12/23/2014 12:27:00 AM
Thank you Jerry for your visit and your comment.. glad you read what you needed to know! I wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

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