Lady Autumn - Mirrored Tanka

Lady Autumn's here She paints with magical brush Reds,golds,browns, and tans She's very graceful and quick In the air hear her laughter In the air hear her laughter She's very graceful and quick Reds,golds, browns, and tans She paints with magical brush Lady Autumn's here! Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 Copyright@2014 10.08.2014

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Jack Ellison

Date: 10/9/2014 12:48:00 PM

Although autumn has always seemed like a sad time of the year for me, the beauty is unmistakable! Living in Canada, it is always been a harbinger of the coming winter which can be quite brutal. A very colourful write, my dear friend! XXXXX

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 1:26:00 PM

Sorry to hear about Canada weather for you. Send some of that brutal weather here to me, to Miami. I need that, we're supposedly in fall but most of the time is more like still summer...so darn hot! I can't stand it and the humidity is a killer more than the heat. I don't like sweating never did... I just love fall, my favorite season and spring is second. Winter is mild here in Florida, no snow at all, that means no snowman only plastic ones seen decorating some people's homes outside. Well, thank you, my very sweet friend Jack for all. Hugs to you too! ;) have a lovely week and kind weather! xxx D.

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/8/2014 10:54:00 PM

Loved the idea of a mirrored tanks ....well done ....Seren

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 1:15:00 PM

Gad you do Seren my friend. Thank you so much for the visit and all! Hugs! Love peace and light! ;) xxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 6:23:00 PM

You have painted a delightful picture here Dorian:-) hugs jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/9/2014 1:16:00 PM

Thank you Jan! Have a lovely day! Love peace and love to you! ;) xxxxxD.