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Kate's Place

"Well......Howdy, Cowboy!......So, where're ya' from?" A whiskey thirst?? She'll bring you one Dust off your hat, take off your spurs, put down your gun, and share a word. Perhaps, you'd like a little more? A romp upstairs, is a dollar more..., just up those stairs, behind the door Don't hesitate to call her Kate She bets against the cowboy's fate and croons old songs to make a dime Someone else will haunt your mind Kate's your gal. One of a kind ! She owns the joint, the town saloon... She totes a gun, and wears a smile She doesn't play by any rules! She smells of booze, and strong perfume Was burned by love, and kisses spurned, Is cured of dudes, will turn a cheek Ya think she's sweet? Don't cross that street... Red satin dress, her bosom spills, Her gun still smokes. Six lovers killed A painted face, and lips of red But you can't forget, last night in bed... Who are these strangers, that circle the room? Drenched in whiskey and dust of doom, drinking it straight, in the dim saloon? She holds all the power, a new silver dollar A petticoat pistol, in the gambling squalor Ya' can't escape ....... a date with Kate ! _________________________________

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Date: 4/18/2015 2:25:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations in John's "Let 'er Rip - Shoot from the Hip" contest!!! Luv LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2015 6:41:00 AM
Carrie, this is just a "pure fun" read that captured the aura and aroma of a dingy saloon and the inhabitants of such haunts. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 8/11/2014 3:03:00 PM
Your Kate & my Sally sure can ride!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/11/2014 3:25:00 AM
U rock to the top Carrie wid this amazing write, big congrats on first place win!
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:06:00 PM
Carrie, YOU RULE!!! Congrats to you in this challenge. It was so hard for me to understand, I could not even try it!!
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:51:00 PM
Love this Carrie..congrats Tim
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Date: 8/10/2014 8:28:00 PM
Carrie, you bring out the best from the theme. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 8/10/2014 4:10:00 PM
Outstanding write, Carrie! Congrats and nice going. Well deserved win. XXX Ralph
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Date: 8/10/2014 3:34:00 PM
A great job as usual and a fine tale. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/10/2014 2:51:00 PM
Carrie, this is a great tale. I have really enjoyed these contest entries. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/10/2014 2:11:00 PM
Big congrats on this fine win. A truly inspired write.
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Date: 8/10/2014 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved TOP win - I had a good time reading this well-written piece! Pandita
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Date: 8/10/2014 11:47:00 AM
A very delightful poem to read. Congratulations on your top win my dear friend Carrie! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/10/2014 11:44:00 AM
Grats on your first place! What a great poem for the contest well done!
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:42:00 AM
Well done - Kate reminds me of Lydia Wells in The Luminaries. Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:20:00 AM
Very brilliant write, congrats on the win, Carri
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win. An interesting read for sure!
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:38:00 AM
wonderful story:-) Congrats on your tops spot! Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:37:00 AM
Very nice. I love it!
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