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In the Faraway

IN THE FARAWAY The fear of night slung me far away In the ship , in the air , in railway ; Better a journey when there is a ray Than when all is weak and life begins to fray So pleased love is the connecting rod That refreshes me our great accord Which we pledged before men and God Though in the faraway, only this I hoard Therefore I shall come back When nothing again we shall call lack But only to dance and enjoy the rock When all shall be real and none a mock Doubt me not and ask me not how Darling you were then,darling you are now. User's name : Kayod5 Contest's name : IN THE FARAWAY Theme : Romance Contest sponsor : Giorgio V.

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Date: 1/29/2014 4:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win enjoyed your work Thanks for your kind words
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Date: 1/28/2014 10:52:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2014 7:13:00 PM
Thank Sara,stay blessed. Kayod5
Date: 1/27/2014 9:05:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win, Kayod5
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Date: 1/27/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Kayod5.
Date: 1/26/2014 9:11:00 AM
This is wow! I love the connections between the lines and paragraphs. The outpour of what you feel from the inside is so glaring and real. Thanks for this wonderful creativity
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Date: 1/26/2014 9:32:00 AM
Funom, the name of my pride, I am extremely happy to read from you. Immense thanks for being there for me all times. Cheers Makama.
Date: 1/26/2014 8:46:00 AM
This felt like taking a trip into the age of romanticism. Outstanding work.
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Date: 1/26/2014 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Richard, this is the chip I pick from your poetic table , inspiration from good poeple like produced this.Thank you for being there for me. Kayod5.
Date: 1/26/2014 7:35:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..I was delighted that you were there..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Sara,your work inspires. Kayod5.
Date: 1/26/2014 5:30:00 AM
I love the flow and emotions here Kayod5 well done gl in contest too Shadow x smile hug most inspiring
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Date: 1/26/2014 6:12:00 AM
Immense thanks Shadow,I am just one of your students here ; I am happy I am doing it the way you want ,keep teaching as I keep learning. You are my inestimable source of inspiration. Have a wonderful week. Kayod5.
Date: 1/26/2014 5:03:00 AM
Lovely romantic expressions, Kayod5
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Date: 1/26/2014 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Dr. , I count on you for improvement. Have a lovely Sunday and a rewarding week. Kayod5.
Date: 1/25/2014 10:39:00 PM
This is a brilliant write! I surely loved reading this delightful poem! What a fabulous piece! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/26/2014 2:06:00 AM
Thanks you Russell for adding colour to my Sunday,how good is it to read from you.Stay blessed. Kayod5
Date: 1/25/2014 8:48:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Kayod5. Love the darling, means forever... SKAT
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Date: 1/26/2014 1:59:00 AM
Immense thanks SKAT ,nice to read from you.Have a wonderful Sunday and a rewarding week. Kayod5.
Date: 1/25/2014 7:11:00 PM
when done for love no quest is before its time...enjoyed this a lot...
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Date: 1/25/2014 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Weston,when will I have some juice from the garden? Stay blessed. Kayod5

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