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In Shadow of Raven

Constance-Rambling Poet For Contest: Among The dead By John Moses Freeman ~It is said of Raven the dead are fed… she walks in death’s broad ways among the tombs… in the valley of the shadow of death… she speaks, they comprehend her bequeath! ~But death’s Lord be also Lord of life… his paradox thus be life and death… death having become mercy, where is thy sting… what of illusions but life vesting death's fling! ~Souls treading in death’s dark and shadowed valley… having become wise as the serpent’s part… making straight and narrow the crooked place… lift up serpent's cure on a pole for a space! ~Adamant be the particles of light’s truth… adapted to dark illusions of scheme… until their serpent's darkness be filled… judgment fulfilled beseeches grave's cruel seal! ~Raven darkness be sister of the graves… her serpent divided her from light… in darkness she proves the plight… for darkness comprehends not truth’s light! ~Adamant love betwixt is a fulcrum’s glue… transpires chaos to order as one truth… thus the shadowed sister of darkness plight… is approved of elect lady’s light! ~ Thus in the very essence of Raven... truth of her life destiny is engraved in...Selah! By John Moses Freeman For Contest: Among The dead In Honor of Constance-Rambling Poet

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Date: 2/24/2011 12:11:00 PM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations John. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:49:00 AM
This an amazing write John with great form and beautiful presentation!Congrats on your well deserved win in the contest---kashinath
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:24:00 AM
Many congratulations John on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:54:00 AM
This was definitely one of the best entries I've read for the contest, John. Congratulations doesn't seem to say enough. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:43:00 AM
john.... gorgeusly dark!! CONGRATS on the win! :)hugggs, nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:40:00 AM
Great story, John. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:37:00 PM
This is so beautiful. many congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:57:00 PM
You made it to the promised land with this one, John. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of constance, John
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with this beautiful story, John. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with this beautiful story, John. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:05:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy your success with luv..
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:30:00 PM
This is beautiful. The words, the phrasing, the visual aspect and the feeling/meaning. An awesome write. You captured the essence of the picture in this contest perfectly. Thank you for great honor you gave me in awarding me a third place spot in your contest. I greatly appreciate it. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:46:00 AM
Wow what a great submission for Constance's contest John the best to you in the contest. I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments . It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:10:00 AM
Hello John. I am absolutely Delighted and highly honoured for my win in your contest. It is a spur to keep learning at this great form of writing. I wish you the very best in the contest with this great interpretation of Constance's task. Once again thanks from a grateful poet in training. Eamon
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Date: 1/16/2011 11:08:00 PM
This is an excellent poem John, love the form also, good luck with this in the contest, also thanks for my placement in your contest, that which i really enjoyed. Harry
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:16:00 PM
incredible interplay of dualityas a theme... fine tonality and substanceas well john; a winner's take! oh, thanks for appreciating my piece for your contest with a surprisingly high rating.. truly an unforgettable creative journey with you and the souper! :) nette
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:41:00 PM
Extraordinary in the message, as in the art of poetry, dear John. This somber subject handled with great inspiration, and comfort of faith. Just terrific !! love, Carrie and thanks too, for all your kind support and for my placement in your wonderful contest....t'was fun and great to read all the amazing entries!! Thanks very much !!
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Date: 1/16/2011 1:56:00 AM
An intruiging write John on light and darkness and your Ravens quest... Beneath in its undertowns again and again I came back to Adam and Eve... Best wishes for the contest and thanks for your most welcome comments!
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Date: 1/15/2011 2:13:00 PM
Spectacular Moses.. a poignant story of Raven and her journey with Death and Life combined.. good luck in Constance's contest my friend.. truly an awesome chart topper for sure ..luv..
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Date: 1/15/2011 12:37:00 PM
john, this form is most interesting. YOu are the second or third poet this week I've read using it and I will have to check it ou! Nice and lyrical poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/15/2011 10:18:00 AM
I especially like the next to last stanza starting at "Adamant love"..Good one..Thanks for stopping by and acknowledging my entry..Sara
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Date: 1/15/2011 7:37:00 AM
Soup mail, John.
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:42:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:26:00 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your amazing write John. Love, Carol
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