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In a hotel room

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In a hotel room

 Their meetings were always clandestine
Often in the same hotel room
and on the same day and time
where by lustful desires  they were consumed
and by the smell of cheap perfume



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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 6:39:00 PM
    I love the ending line ;) this is the epitome of perfection for the contest! Very well done

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 2:06:00 PM
    The second and third lines really threw me, leaving much to ponder and digest...Great job, Joseph - Tim

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 8:38:00 AM
    this poem makes it sound tawdry, as it should be. Good one, Joseph.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:28:00 AM
    well this leaves the imagination reeling Joseph,, excellent poem, just love this...

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 2/8/2013 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so Harry....that was my intent...glad it came across....
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Great write Joseph.....Seren

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 2/8/2013 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Seren
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Hello Joseph, awee... cheap perfume... a good entry.. good luck in the contest...LINDA

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 2/8/2013 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you PD....
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:17:00 PM
    why cheap perfume? Id save up for the best! lol. Loved it. BG

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 2/8/2013 6:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol.....Maybe white diamonds?...thank you Barbara
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 4:46:00 PM
    She let her bra strap fall gently Slowly he undressed her Her petticoat laying on the floor They made love behind the door Nice poem Joseph, just thought I'd add on, xxx

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 2/7/2013 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    your addition complemented mine quite well....thank you Rose.....