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In a Hotel Room

Their meetings were always clandestine Often in the same hotel room and on the same day and time where by lustful desires they were consumed and by the smell of cheap perfume

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/10/2013 2:06:00 PM
The second and third lines really threw me, leaving much to ponder and digest...Great job, Joseph - Tim
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Date: 2/8/2013 8:38:00 AM
this poem makes it sound tawdry, as it should be. Good one, Joseph.
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Date: 2/8/2013 4:28:00 AM
well this leaves the imagination reeling Joseph,, excellent poem, just love this...
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2013 6:19:00 AM
thank you so Harry....that was my intent...glad it came across....
Date: 2/7/2013 11:06:00 PM
Great write Joseph.....Seren
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2013 6:18:00 AM
thank you Seren
Date: 2/7/2013 8:51:00 PM
Hello Joseph, awee... cheap perfume... a good entry.. good luck in the contest...LINDA
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2013 6:17:00 AM
thank you PD....
Date: 2/7/2013 8:17:00 PM
why cheap perfume? Id save up for the best! lol. Loved it. BG
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2013 6:14:00 AM
lol.....Maybe white diamonds?...thank you Barbara

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