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I'M Sorry

Now my world is falling apart... Always been stupid, never been smart.... And finally when I've tried to do something good .. I've tried hard more than I should...I t's really not my fault I haven't done anything wrong... My life sucks like salt, I can't hold on any long... It's killing me to know that I've lost their trust.. .I feel like my heart is covered by dust and crashing from rust... How can I fix this up? How can I fix it when time refuse to stop? His wards are in my mined and his darts straight in my heart... The look on his face is tearing my arteries a parts... His voice do get through my bones... His voice can shake mountains and break stones... I wish I could tell him I'm sorry but, , it's too late... And I pray to have his love and not his hate...

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White Sage

Date: 6/3/2017 12:40:00 PM

Reading your writes over again and discovered how sad this is, this is not just only about love...this is more about a heart trying to communicate, a mind trying to channel itself and a hope trying to tell itself to the world....how so beautiful this is, it comes right from a place in the depths of the heart. so deep and written beautifully and bluntly emotional...it takes a great writer to write from the heart. Excellent one Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/12/2017 7:41:00 PM

Thank you so much I surly do appreciate your feedback and your lovely visit , much appreciated , hugs// :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/1/2016 1:30:00 AM

Your pain speaks truthfully, bleeding fragrantly into the night's sorrow and hope Dalia...nothing punishes and forgives like wild love my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/4/2016 4:14:00 AM

I'm sorry my friend for replying late and I thank you so much my dear for ur lovely comment, hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 1/17/2016 10:34:00 AM

LOVE's your favorite pen...excellent write D, well written

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:29:00 AM

Thank you , I appreciate it , hugs / / :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/8/2016 4:54:00 PM

I am like yourself Dalia, i don't need to tell you that i Love to write on Love. You seem to like to do the same and you do it well. Your pen now dipped into a golden crucible of eternal words, to form whatever pictures your heart my desire. I really enjoyed the read my friend. All i can say is, always let the heart sing Dalia. A seven is in order my friend. ...Vladislav.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/8/2016 5:11:00 PM

Oh my dear I'm captured by this lovely comment , I adore to write love poems and very sad poems too my favorite types actually , thank u so much for ur mesmerizing words really , they're much appreciated , hugs / / :) dalia

Black Matta

Date: 10/15/2015 12:34:00 PM

I noticed that "Love" is your favorite topic. You are in love, you seek it, you are afraid to lose it, you want to keep it. Blackmatta sending LOVE for you from Palestine ??

Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/15/2015 12:53:00 PM

Thanks alot my friend 4 ur lovely comment, in fact yes I do like to write about love topics although I'm not in love but I get inspired by romantic stories, movies, poems, songs and sometimes I just feel that I want to or that I need to write a love poem....u know just thoughts.... Love and hugs :)