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I Wove You a Poem Uncut

i had a dream and in the dream i wove you a poem i used the fiber of my character to create spools of silken thread dipped in the juices of my passion i dyed them in the colors of my imagination and re-enforced each and every single strand with the strength of my love spun the spools from the intricacy of my spirit designed a pattern to the rhythm of the music of my inner thoughts enamored in your vision crystal beads gather on my brow as i toil your finely bred gift as i braid every part of me with every memory into every sliver of fabric sew in the loving glow emits my flawless dreams and with my boiling blood initial my woven piece my work at an end i awake you lay there a wingless angel smiling as if you heard a bell ring your boundless warmth embraces me without a touch barely with just a hint i kiss you so not to disturb your sleep and whisper 'thank you’ Maurice Yvonne entered for The Poet Contest September 1 2014

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Date: 8/21/2023 9:20:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/13/2014 3:18:00 PM
Maurice, I like the first version better.There were some added phrases in this one I did not find necessary. I just remember liking the other one better. Of course, this one is good too!! Why did you have a cut and uncut version? If you felt the need to cut or edit, then I think you must have known instinctively that it was wise to do that. Good eye!!
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Date: 9/13/2014 12:56:00 AM
I enjoyed this touching poem that was woven straight from the heartstrings. I loved the phrase and the thought of a "wingless angel".... Congratulations on your win with this nice write, Maurice!
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent piece! Kika
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Date: 9/3/2014 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on such a nice poem. So touching and sweet at the end.
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:05:00 AM
Yeah, I'm here visiting any old reply, left on my comments. Sometimes my e-mail box, goes crazy. And I let them sit there for a week or two:):):) However, it makes me smile, when I click, and see who it is........ Love Linda
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/2/2014 9:14:00 AM
as do I. Lots of love.
Date: 9/2/2014 8:39:00 AM
Hi Maurice, I'm here to thank you for the sweet reply on the bottom...Linda
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/2/2014 8:42:00 AM
from my heart to the page. Thank you for visiting.
Date: 8/15/2014 9:45:00 PM
Maurice, a wonderful, way to end a poem. Thank you for the heartfelt read. With such a little hint.... so much to embrace...Linda
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/17/2014 10:20:00 PM
somehow i feel seduced. you have a wonderful way of commenting. attractive to say the least. thank you as always.
Date: 8/15/2014 9:09:00 AM
Reading your work was my pleasure Maurice.
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Date: 8/14/2014 7:02:00 PM
Very, very endearing. Light & Love
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/14/2014 7:43:00 PM
i love that remark "endearing" thank you. also lots of love and light your way too.
Date: 8/14/2014 7:35:00 AM
Wow! Fantastic piece and imagery, I am greatly impressed. Off to read your next one.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/14/2014 12:08:00 PM
after reading some of your work i take that as a great compliment. you are very talented. you are so kind to take the time to read my work. really helped to lift my day. thank you.
Date: 8/14/2014 6:34:00 AM
Interesting tapestry that you have loomed..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/14/2014 12:10:00 PM
and thank you for taking the time here. it is appreciated.

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