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I Take Aim

I TAKE AIM I shield myself from impending darkness putting on glasses each day I TAKE AIM I nourish your dreams with meals of desire through doorways appeal I TAKE AIM I dress in layers of surrogate flames inert searching empty places I TAKE AIM © Kim van Breda

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/22/2015 10:35:00 PM
It's right on aim with that centering effect. An interesting one Kim!
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/23/2015 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...always appreciate your comments ~~X~~
Date: 9/22/2015 11:31:00 AM
nicely written, i liked it. i like how you wrote to too - centered, in sections.
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/23/2015 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Bo... I enjoyed the formatting in this one too ~~X~~

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