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I Miss You

I am walking along the shore, the sun is returning to its home. I feel the freedom it brings to me. As I watch the sunset over the sea. Alone, I sat down in the sand. Pour it on my hands and let it down. I close my eyes,take a deep breathe on my lungs. "God! I miss you!"...whispers on my mind. It's been too long since you'd been mine. Your lips and burning kiss slave me in the night. The touch of your skin,a feeling so divine. I feel it in my soul,even now that you're gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/28/2014 3:10:00 PM
SO SAD WOWWW!! good though
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Date: 3/12/2014 10:15:00 AM
Very beautiful!!!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/12/2014 10:19:00 AM
Thank You, PACE!!! ..^__^
Date: 2/17/2014 11:45:00 AM
Aiyah an excellent image you portray, love the romance in it...David
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Date: 2/17/2014 11:10:00 AM
how beautiful Aiyah it speaks volumes hugs
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Date: 2/15/2014 10:07:00 PM
Dear AiyaH, The sunset crying, Your hands, an hourglass,Your breath stolen and the memory makes love to you! You are a poetic wonder woman! 7+ luv, chuck
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/16/2014 2:38:00 AM
Chuck....my dearest Chuck...your words always hit my heart so much!!! ...if I am a poetic wonder woman...then you are OUR poetic Superman!!! ..thanks for dropping by my good friend.. >__<
Date: 2/15/2014 3:29:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL.... Flowed wonderfully... I really liked this allot hun !!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/16/2014 2:41:00 AM
my dear Debbie...though we just know each other recently...you've been so nice to this young lady.. he he.. i appreciate your comment so much!! mwahugs!!!! >__<
Date: 2/15/2014 9:03:00 AM
- A touching and well written poem - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/16/2014 3:38:00 AM
i like your new avatar photo..he he... grrr!!!! ..can't still move on loving those furry creatures!!!,,, >__<
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/16/2014 2:43:00 AM
My dearest Anne....Thank you so much!!! ,,may you have a great weekend as well ...huggs >__<
Date: 2/14/2014 11:13:00 PM
Aiyah, thank you for the sentimental and heartwrench walk. I like the feeling you express, where you find yourself lost in a divine moment. excellent poem... Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/16/2014 2:47:00 AM
PD...thank you for a lot of comments i received from you...may the world be nice to you in every journey you will take....Thank you so much!!!!! >__<
Date: 2/14/2014 6:57:00 PM
Hi Aiyah, I hope you don't get mad when I say this. This is the saddest poem I've read today. WHY? You don't have to answer, I did enjoy the write. SKAT
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/16/2014 2:50:00 AM
SKAT...why should i get angry??>..of course i am!!! ..ha ha.. your comments are like fuel to my soul...that's why i keep on writing..thank you so much!!!!>__<

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