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Thoughts a float, who should say? Speak up speak up this is your day. Safety in hope rest more. I see you only to reveal myself. An expression with a funny face, distorted even. Time on time we surf, waving in between. Hello, I love you. What a feeling.

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Kendra Ruczak

Date: 7/21/2015 5:12:00 PM

This is beautiful! I love the line: "Time on time we surf, waving in between."

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/4/2015 12:52:00 AM

I love this. A sweet, brief, fun write. Nicely done. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Debra. Have a great time here reading and sharing with us fellow wordsmiths. Viv x

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:38:00 PM

Debra, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 5:33:00 PM

Debra, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@