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Fleeting Rose

The wind whispers secrets of time. Time that passes as swiftly as the whispering wind. Who gazes at the desert rose? ..with its fleeting beauty and it's unique pose ...the day it was born, the day it goes? He who lines the stars in place, He knows each name, He knows each face. And the wind whispers once and its gone forever. Forever, the desert rose sleeps. Alas, as it's starry audience weeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/7/2012 6:46:00 AM
I believe in this poem, its unique to the heart.There's much you can relate to in it.Thanx for it. Gideon
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:52:00 AM
Hi Crista, this is wonderful! I love the line "He who lines the start in place". Very well written. N :)
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:30:00 AM
Emotional and stunning. Great job, Crista!
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