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Falling into perfection

     Thoughts precipitate
 Like  snowfall  on Christmas day
          The perfect gift

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  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:26:00 PM
    Joseph, .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

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    Date: 1/10/2014 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It was a lovely trip down memory lane PD, and sad to see you say you're leaving...hugs
  1. Date: 12/26/2013 10:40:00 PM
    thoughts have come exceptionally alive on this Christmastime. Love the idea of fallen-snow thoughts.. Merry Christmas!

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 7:18:00 AM
    Beautiful thoughts expressed in an amazing haiku! Merry Christmas to you

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 8:33:00 PM
    Interesting Haiku. Well expressed : ) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 9:01:00 AM
    WOW, what a haiku!!!

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 8:05:00 PM
    you're thoughts are a gift from heaven above I am glad you realize this sweet revelation Joseph xxx

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:03:00 PM
    Nice write Joseph, I don't think we will be having snow on Christmas day Here in Western Australia though more likely to be burning You have a wonderful Christmas, my friend, and a wonderful new year....peter.

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 11:51:00 AM
    - Yes,the perfect gift - well done Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)