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-eye Bags and Heart Madness-

her legs unending she was wearing a mini her crimson red lips his heart pounding rapidly her eye bags slowed his heart rate *Missy Nikko's "weird" body part of choice eye bags, combined with Carolyn's body part of choice the heart :) * 20/04/2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/27/2011 10:28:00 AM

Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Wilma. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2011 10:39:00 AM

Interesting work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2011 12:15:00 AM

hahaha. I love this one. Those eyebags can be real downers!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/20/2011 10:56:00 AM

HA HA!!! I love the footnote and the poem is a riot! You should enter this in Francine's contest, if you haven't already entered. You gave me a great laugh! Thank you, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn (Want to write a poem about my hammer toes? Kidding of course)

Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/20/2011 4:51:00 AM

Original and well thought out Wilma !Anne

Kash Poet

Date: 4/20/2011 4:31:00 AM

......and the heart is still pounding!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/20/2011 4:17:00 AM

I like eye bags!!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/20/2011 1:52:00 AM

hugs hugs hugssssss ^_^

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/20/2011 1:51:00 AM

oh whooosh-- there ya go, eye bags what a turn off eh? silly guy for not realizing he is the main reason for those eye bags though?? tossing & turning for this guy & look what he does?? haha! but super kudos to you for running away (in your mile-long legs) with this write-- see no challenge is too hard for you? this is a cool write on eye bags & heart! haha you want me to go back to the nose? nose hair ^_^ I am serious!!