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Dawns Lure of Malvan Beach

Blue carpet waves, White foam gyrates. Cool breeze blowing, Beaming sun growing. Low flying crows, Fishing nets throws, Slumbering dog packs, Dry nets on wooden racks. Lone fisherman rows, Sea gulls numbers grows, Around water dripping nets, Pelagic fish they ferret. Silver silky waves, Low flying eagles braves, Sand shacks longboats, Orange buoys afloat. Sun rays warm up, Need black coffee cup It is 8 am this morn, Can I be here at morrow’s dawn?
The allure of a lure is alluring Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/5/2012 5:59:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you for your win in Paula's "Allure" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations Sashi a beautiful image you painted with your words here xx
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I like your style. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:07:00 AM
Very nice descriptive work by you Sashi.Happy Holi to you too.(the form is here couplet,not monorhyme)
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/7/2012 7:15:00 PM
thanks KASH for the correction.... these are rhyming couplets... my favs ..........once more HAPPY HOLI...........~sashi

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