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Choices

Choices are hard, they changes fate, so make the wisest ones and regret no mistakes: time is impossible to stop... like falling stars with their sparkling tails! Entered in nette onclaud's contest, " Create Your Own Pyramid " Written by Andrew Crisci on 5/4/2014

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Date: 6/8/2014 11:25:00 AM
Nice poem, Andrew. To the point with its poetic description of choices, with great expression. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 6/4/2014 5:11:00 AM
Please give once over to the lines and syllables. The poem two triplets and one line, andrew
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Date: 6/4/2014 5:08:00 AM
Thought provoking expression penned so well, andrew
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