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' Carpenter's Rule ... ' 54th Senryu

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' Carpenter's Rule ... ' 54th Senryu

‘ Carpenter’s Rule … ’      54th  Senryu

   ‘ HE ’  … Is Not A Fool
Can Not Use GOD, Like A Tool ...
     Carpenter’s Gold-Rule

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  1. Date: 11/27/2009 1:26:00 PM
    You are on a roll, MoonBee. On a senryu journey across the Soup. How delightful your writings are. Love to you. Dane Ann (Soupmail)

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 8:40:00 PM
    Only one rule so golden, but seems so hard for humanity to learn, how to measure with. No matter, it will still be there after all is said and done. Some will have to learn later. Sincere, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 8:22:00 PM
    very cool! soup-mail!

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 5:34:00 PM
    We tend to take Him for granted very often! Thought-provoking! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/25/2009 4:25:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts on the about "He" and the carpenter's golden-rule. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara