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Belly Shirt of Age

Progressively pending the day The day, when his memory fades The day when that old belly shirt shreds As poetic minds cannot Within the moan rhythmically intellect stands He says farewell with self importance I say hello verse you end with expressions To poetry a belly shirt never shreds Within the shame of adolescence Nor does a elegance of a aged love With the heart of an adolescent becoming a lady He stands with me eternally.

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Date: 4/24/2016 11:50:00 AM
Interesting very nice and different
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 4/23/2016 2:50:00 PM
Very raw and different I rather liked this one for its rarity.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 4/14/2016 1:24:00 PM
Very teen years poem. I liked it, very different and bold.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thank you

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