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-belly Button Madness-

his fingers map out subtle areas all over-- my belly button no exception, impious outlines, his goal to stir me… *another "challenge" from Missy Nikko* :) 11/04/2011

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James Fraser

Date: 4/28/2011 12:47:00 PM

Ooo I want to be a cartographer and re-draw this undulating map. All contours covered and sized. Terrific Tanka Wilma....:)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/12/2011 1:17:00 PM

Really stirring write!It is almost 2AM of 13th here!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2011 5:19:00 AM

hot and steamy .. Wilma.. on fire in my mind with fantastic playful lines.. that Missy Nikko is something else and a sweet friend too..luv.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/11/2011 6:16:00 PM

Create lovely sensual feelings, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2011 3:37:00 PM

Wilma, I have to tell you about my belly button sometime! This is really cool. WIsh I had time to check out what all this is about with challenges but I am rushing off as usual. LUv, andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/11/2011 3:09:00 PM

Cold Shower even if I lived in Alaska after this read....Lucky fingers , with a heated write... LOvely warm feeling my dear Wilma..love Michael ps Might have to get in on these writes lol

James Foulk

Date: 4/11/2011 2:39:00 PM

a great piece of creative work

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/11/2011 2:17:00 PM

hmmm, enjoying the word challenge here with nikks, wilma.... outrageously divine! ;) hugggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/11/2011 8:35:00 AM

What a warm romantic poem, Wilma. My belly button is ticklish, though, and it would eliminate any feelings of passion. Really enjoyed this one, dear. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/11/2011 5:40:00 AM

yup, I had to think of something that would be a bit cold for your hotties-- the nose, knows, righty?? ok ok get back to work-- & I mean REAL work!! haha see you later when I get back--you better have a nose write missy ;) kidding! & yup, insanity's my middle name & I think so is yours lol ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/11/2011 5:32:00 AM

thank you--you are too kind! & hmm are you up for more madness? haha I should be judging lol and what am I doing here?! ok keep yourself busy-- soup might get too hot & burn--I would have to go skip, skip over the other juicy parts though and go straight to and Pick the -------------------->NOSE!!! hahaha!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/11/2011 5:11:00 AM

gosh you sure are stepping up to the plate Missy with this hottie! I think I better call you Missy Hottie :p-- my feet poem sucks! pales, pales, pales to yours! Whew!!! gosh are you ready for another challenge??