Beautiful Lies

Because of eyes as warm as honey, I was melting, but the love I first believed was shown me in his gaze was but a lie. He uttered not a word; I was deceived! He leaned in for that first romantic kiss. I melted more; my heart did somersaults. How easily that man could bring me bliss. But I would learn his luscious lips were false! His gorgeous body, hard, pressed into me. I felt his fingers softly touch my skin. I totally dissolved! How cleverly he’d worked unspoken lies on me again! That young man with his beautiful brown eyes at last destroyed me with beautiful lies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 3/25/2020 11:13:00 PM
Andrea, great written poem a big congratulations on your win in Brian's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/25/2020 12:21:00 PM
Andrea, your sonnets are always as warm as honey to me. Happy I read this, glad it wasn't a non-fiction write! You are so great at sonnets, you could probably write one about a Coke commercial and win a prize, haha! My compliments and congrats on your deserved #1 ~ John
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Date: 3/25/2020 12:56:00 AM
Andrea! Congratulations on your first place win. Oh, betrayal - so painful. Something no one should have to experience. Yet your poem shows how you were able to heal and share your wisdom. So excellent!
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Date: 3/25/2020 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations on our First Place win Andrea. Tho fiction, this one sounded real to me. Great work! xxoo
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Date: 9/30/2018 7:13:00 PM
The sad broken heart. I remember you telling me a different story about this gentleman. : )
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Date: 9/30/2018 8:53:00 PM
this one was pure fiction, my friend!!!
Date: 5/30/2017 11:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea...
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Date: 5/30/2017 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this well-written sonnet, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 5/30/2017 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my rhyme battle contest, Andrea! This was excellent :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 8/13/2013 10:06:00 AM
congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:35:00 PM
WOW....LOVE IT ANDREA,,,,,, SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:39:00 PM
Howdy, Andrea, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:26:00 PM
awesome nate
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Date: 2/10/2013 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/7/2013 11:52:00 PM
Lovely words Andrea, Mandy and I will sort him out for you lol..........Seren
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Date: 2/8/2013 8:30:00 AM
Funny, Seren! I exaggerated this poem and if I could name any one guy this poem describes, he is so far away in my past I would not even know how to find him so you and Mandy could beat him up for me!haha
Date: 2/5/2013 6:04:00 AM
Here we go Andy flexing the fingers, love this one and he sounds dreamy lol congratulations xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:04:00 PM
Andrea, a wonderful winning poem~ PD
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Date: 2/4/2013 9:57:00 PM
congrats Andrea....enjoyed..
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:17:00 PM
Go sonneteers! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/4/2013 2:59:00 AM
We all have been victims of CUPID, this winged-tyrant of our hearts. He leaves us something though: The moment we believed in and the poems we write afterwards. Wonderful suffering that the sweet arrows of CUPID had in store for us. Marvelous poem! Thank you.
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Date: 12/22/2012 8:38:00 PM
I guess we all had someone who told us lies while looking into our eyes. A wonderful poem. love phyl
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Date: 12/19/2012 1:20:00 PM
A very interesting read and well written, too. You have a gift for sonnets.
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Date: 12/19/2012 10:58:00 AM
mine was a blue-eyed liar. great entry for the contest Andrea. ( Honey is working out fine, she still has trust issues , but she very rarely hisses or bites anymore, only if you make a sudden move that scares her a lot)
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Date: 12/18/2012 9:36:00 PM
I love this Andrea,,,, I know some brown eyes myself ;} I hope this is a win. thank you for reading my " Market Place" I was watching Anime on utube. Then I wrote it,,,, thinking of lost/ sex trafficking kids ;}
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Date: 12/16/2012 8:14:00 PM
Oh my, this is an awesome poem. Nicely done - JH
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Date: 12/16/2012 3:10:00 PM
Wow! An amazing Sonnet. I wish you success in the Contest. The story of a lustful and licentious youth is beautifully narrated. Thanks for visiting my poem The Aging Tree. I am glad you like it. Love. -Mohammad
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