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Aesthetic Fireworks In a Soiree

Sparks of golden quarks Amazing particles of heart Pyrotechnic shower Too fine Almost from cloud nine Rise from the articulation-flood In the fulfilled flow of fascinated blood As effusive praise in Aha and Wows The moment a poet finished an Urdu shayari in a mood of sunset Like in the couplet: “If someone were to listen, one thing I will opine Love is not a crime forsooth it is grace divine” in a poetry soiree in a gleaming evening I can see in the frame of my mind’s eye Those soul-sparkles in a diamond glow With jaws distended in a gape In a variety of shape Beautifully blowing up By the chorus of wows, and wah wah In the wake of delivery of the rhythmic couplets and quatrains Fine grains of pain Pomegranates in pleasure In poetry or shayari Also called “Sher” And then the sparklers from the listeners taking illuminated seats On the trees in the garden Looking resplendent with those fireworks of satisfaction Grand vocal pyrotechnics of the artistic colors inside our soul Our whole world now at the goals of releasing The ingrained heat and light Into softly loud appreciation and approval from the aroused assembly Of pink interest An aesthetic quest in the bird-like flying of the eloquent firework The sophisticated atomizer of stirring pyro-spark A soul-stirring recital followed by the sparks of applause From the embers of the latter arise another shayari On goes the reciprocation Of passionate oral fireworks of elation Quarks in the pulse Shower of polished spark In sublimation of our basic dark
____________________________________________________________ June 5, 2016 For: Fireworks for Me – Poetry Contest Sponsored by : Julia Ward Note: 1) Shayari is a musical form of Urdu poetry… - Wikipedia 2) Wah - Used typically to express admiration -Oxford Dictionaries ( Internet)

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Date: 6/14/2016 3:02:00 AM
This is very rich and positively intense. A true firework. Congratulations.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/14/2016 5:28:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 6/13/2016 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Probir. Nicely done. ...Fran
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 10:00:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/13/2016 12:13:00 PM
Very nice, Probir! Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 6/13/2016 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend drawn with loving poetic shayari colors. A great congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 6/13/2016 11:58:00 AM
As Sandra said, it is a very short list of winners, so you did very well to come in fourth place. I enjoyed stepping into your culture and 'partaking' in the soirée. Congratulations! Julia, with best wishes.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so much for the opportunity to take part in the contest...
Date: 6/13/2016 11:47:00 AM
A great metaphorical write Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 12:41:00 PM
Yes, thank you...
Date: 6/13/2016 11:28:00 AM
Amazing poem, Probir, so full of metaphors and deep meaning. Congratulations to your for your placement on the very short list of winners in this Premiere Contest. 7, Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/13/2016 12:42:00 PM
Thank you Sandra ...

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