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A Robin's Sound

A Robin’s Sounds On, this bench I sat, wishing my situation was not Everything seems wrong, within my path I need a turnaround!, I need a turnaround! Surrounded by trees, and an orange sun Looking for answers before I move on Lonely I sat, with a hurting heart Silently weeping, as people go by Between the leaves, I heard a wonderful sound It was a robin, singing her melodies I creeped to the spot, where, she was singing majestically She saw me and wanted to get free No, no, I am only here, to listen quietly She flew high, not trusting me Now, lonely I was, and lonely again Wishing I could stay in that robbins's suspense She lifted me to a place of tranquility My mind was free, momentarily Rapped, in the sounds, of the robin’s beauty I trusted her sound, to rest my miseries Back to reality, that brought me to this, bench

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/26/2020 10:26:00 AM
I enjoyed this peaceful expression.
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Date: 11/21/2015 10:29:00 PM
Myles, a heartfelt poem. Stunning imagery. LINDA
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Date: 12/10/2015 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Linda.. Thanks for stopping by..
Date: 10/22/2015 5:19:00 AM
Myles, the sweet sounds of nature are natural soothers to tensed thoughts and feelings.. thoughtful of you! I enjoyed the read! =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 10/25/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you for stopping, again... Thanks for your encouraging words.. Nature is wonderful, and we need each other...
Date: 10/14/2015 7:01:00 AM
Hi Myles. This is a nice poem about how nature can change ones spirit. I would hold on to the thoughts of tranquility and seek the robins company until that feeling became permanent. The reality with the robin sounds much better. Very well written yet sad. I enjoyed the poem my friend..... Robert.
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Date: 10/18/2015 2:27:00 PM
Hi Robert, your words are so true, that nature can change ones spirit.. We need one other, but we also need nature.. Thanks for reading and commenting.. I look forward, reading and enjoying your poems.. Thanks again...
Date: 10/9/2015 11:11:00 AM
Shades of Keat's nightengale? Personally I would take an aspirin, bird calls drive me nuts! Well written poem. You didn't find the error in my poem. Sorry. Your point, however, was well taken. Thank you for stopping by. / M
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Date: 10/9/2015 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, sir.. I enjoy your, wit !! See you around and your provocative thoughts.. Much respect, to you...

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