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' a Rainbow - Mist ... '

Leave Behind Drab-Disapproving Crowds Run In Rainbow-Mist, A Bright-Prism-Cloud Where Iridescence Gleams Unbound Sparkles, Head To Toe … Sky To Ground Pssst (Listen)… One Place, Where One Is Found: … In Sunshine and Sprinklers Going ‘Round ! …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 1:51:00 PM
What a childly place you take one to in that last line ... beautiful
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Date: 11/28/2009 8:21:00 PM
Imaginative and interesting use of flowing words... I just luv rainbows... your style is grand... MoonBee u are a wonderfully gifted poet... we need to form a "Poetess Club" ..a spinoff of the Soup ladies.. what do u think?... thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry always... good friend .. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/27/2009 8:31:00 PM
Great imagery here, MoonBee! I enjoyed this! Made me smile! Peace and love, Audrey
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