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A Mothers Concern

A Mothers Concern Dear My Children, I know you will moan, cry and weep for me; now that I’m gone. I found my resting place; know that I’m never alone. God will always be with you, He has never failed you yet, Just remember the joy we've had a time well spent You can sing, shout tell jokes to you hearts content; but know this…I love you: my love you will never forget. Continue to look out for each another, let your love be known, ‘cause mom is looking down from heaven up above. A Mothers Concern

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2015 9:14:00 PM
Very nice and heartfelt tribute, love it.
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 9/26/2015 1:12:00 PM
Thank You
Date: 2/21/2015 10:04:00 AM
Hello my friend, I've been down your road of lost loved one's, and the pain moans deep. Nice poem that I enjoyed profoundly, but, the line, "He has never failed you yet," to me implies that He may let us down. God, will never let us down period! He always on time. Would be "Great" poem without "Yet." Stay strong, always Ken
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/21/2015 11:21:00 AM
Thank You, that was not the intent, but I will changed that. I truly appreciate your comment.
Date: 2/19/2015 6:30:00 PM
Jeanette:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/16/2015 9:09:00 AM
Hi Jeanette, I am so glad I came across this beautiful heart-tugging piece! Apart from being an excellent write, it expresses emotions that are so reflective of what we as loving mothers feel for our precious children! Bravo, my friend and I rate this a solid "7"! Warmest regards. Pandita.
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 9/26/2015 1:12:00 PM
thank you
Date: 2/16/2015 1:21:00 AM
A mother's love towards her children knows no bounds, even after her mortal frame quits this world! Your poem is soul-stirring and beautifully penned.I like it.
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/16/2015 7:31:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 2/8/2015 4:03:00 PM
Jeanette, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/9/2015 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Poet
Date: 2/8/2015 3:17:00 PM
Jeanette, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/8/2015 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Skat, I appreciate that,
Date: 2/6/2015 5:37:00 PM
a mother truly an angel always held in the heart deep touching very beautifully penned piece jeanette bless you
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/6/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thank you liam, I appreciate your comment, I just lost my aunt, and I felt compelled to write that to her kids on her behalf
Date: 2/6/2015 2:26:00 PM
Welcome to the sight...everything is going to be alright. This was a touching poem. Thanks
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/6/2015 2:28:00 PM
Thanks ,Daisy Marie Yant
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/6/2015 2:27:00 PM
Sorry about spelling your name,
Date: 2/6/2015 2:16:00 PM
- So sweet and lovely poem your first poem here at the P- Soup - Welcome Jeanette ! - I wish you a great weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeanette Priest
Date: 2/6/2015 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lose, yes it's my first poem. I written this the same day my aunt passed way which was three days ago

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