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A Life :He Wept

He held the child for the first time Such a fragile gift , he felt unworthy As he watched her drift off to dream her first dream, he wondered about the life awaiting her. And he wept She ran into his arms , tears flowed like rain He could feel the pain she bore He bandaged her knee and brushed her tears. and held her until she felt safe again. And he wept Her first broken heart tore her in two She cried for days on end. He wanted to hurt the unworthy man who did this to his baby girl, but he just held her close and caught her tears, And he wept. The policeman at the door said nothing could be done, could he come identify the remains His heart fell out that this his darkest day too see his baby girl this way And he wept The crowd of friends and family all came to say farewell , memories were shared of lives she touched and how she left so young. He stayed behind at the gravesite and said " I love you," one last time. And he wept. He sat alone and pulled out the videos Her first steps, her first bike ride, first swim lesson Her first corsage, Her prom dress And the last gift she gave him The wrinkled old sweater he will never throw away And he wept

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/11/2014 8:06:00 PM
Deeply expressed.... . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/7/2014 12:14:00 PM
How sad and powerful.
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Date: 1/7/2014 9:53:00 AM
Hi Carl, thank you for this heartfelt write... Thank you for everything. I got a few more contests in standby.. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2013 7:45:00 PM
Carl....heartbreaking...makes me cry....wonderful writing though....written with such love....
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Carl Fraser
Date: 12/25/2013 8:00:00 PM
Sorry to make you cry at Christmas Donna, was just trying to illistrate how very precious life is, blessings Carl
Date: 12/25/2013 6:36:00 AM
I hope dis isnt about anyone u know closely. But it hapens in d world. U wrote it so touching, so moving. To lose a young daughter must b heartrending. But commendable is how u build dis frm start to finish. Thnx n mery xmas carl.
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Carl Fraser
Date: 12/25/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by, your comments are most appreciated, blessings, Carl
Date: 12/24/2013 1:19:00 PM
I weep with you in this work..Very emotive..I hope not your life but just a work to express how precious is life and how precious are our offsprings..Thanks for the visit..No pun taken..May you be richly bless during this Christmas time..Sara
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Carl Fraser
Date: 12/24/2013 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Sarah, appreciate it always when you stop in
Date: 12/24/2013 2:56:00 AM
Hi Carl, So touching....so heartbreaking.... you carefully lead the reader from the heights of excitement down the depths of anguish as you lay bare the rather sad realities of life...... and we joined him ...as in the poem and ... We Wept..too. Welldone, Carl.
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:22:00 AM
Hello Carl, I'm sadly moved by your poem, I'm sorry, I'm just so moved. :( :(.... The emotions here are too strong, I can feel the heartbreak and the heavy tears. Wishing you a good one all over again.. Hope you are well... LINDA
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Carl Fraser
Date: 12/24/2013 1:42:00 AM
sorry Linda i had to edit this one, i had the last two verses in the wrong spot, hope you will reread it though, blessings Carl

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