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A Good Night's Sleep

I gather my dreams Place them under my pillow Drift out of this world Sleep softens the rough edges Awake with new day's promise
For Brian's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/29/2011 5:27:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:41:00 PM
I just LOVE this. So original, Barbara.congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2011 11:59:00 AM
PS - My entire "table of four" did well in this contest! We golden gals rock together.
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Date: 6/5/2011 11:58:00 AM
Not surprised to see you ranking high with this beauty, dear LNC. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win Barbara. Best wishes to you Em :)
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:12:00 AM
Congrats BG on your third place win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty ..enjoy..with luv..
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:44:00 AM
enjoyed this with gusto, barbara.. congrats big time.:) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/4/2011 4:57:00 PM
Wonderful entry with tanka, Barabara. I enjoyed the images in the write,
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:32:00 PM
Dear LNC, Brian is going to love this one as much as I do. Especially like the way sleep "softens the rough edges." It really does have a way of restoring our spirits. An exquisite entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Glad you enjoyed the Golden Girls. Our secret is out. Now everyone will know we're LNCs. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2011 11:39:00 AM
My wish for sure BG! Good luck for the contest ;) love this btw ;)
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:36:00 AM
" oops-- best" :)
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:35:00 AM
so serene in its imagery, barbara... beat wishes! :) huggs, nette
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