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A good impression?

There were many ways in which I could have said
 the silly scrambled words inside my head,
there were many feelings, deep within my heart
 I'd hoped, would have been easier to impart,
but, my brain would not allow me to reveal
 the strong emotions that I still conceal,
and so, this is my lot,( now you are gone,)
 to suffer the regrets, and in the dark alone,
remember that wasted moment just outside my door,
when you asked if I had coffee, and I said I wasn't sure!

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  1. Date: 7/7/2010 2:36:00 AM
    Like your write and enjoyed reading your poem this morning, June! Thank you for your kind comment on Night Flight and have a nice day...Keep your pen flowing!...Gert

  1. Date: 6/22/2010 6:39:00 AM
    Wow, what an impression!! Love it June :) tc Wilma xx

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 4:15:00 PM
    I enjoyed this, thanks for uploading, regards, Gavin.

  1. Date: 6/11/2010 6:08:00 PM
    a surely good impression lol, enjoyed your write...P.D.