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~*~ has it been twelve years, since you went far away, it feels like yesterday, mother dear . . . I miss you so much, your laughter and your smile, mom, you were my best friend, in this world . . . how can I forget, your last day on this earth, when you whispered to me, I love you . . . and I realize, the incredible gift, I was given that day, whispered words . . . how many can say, they heard those words of love, whispered in the last breathe, before death . . . ~*~ March 26, 2013 Melancholy Form (created by Constance) 5/6/6/3 x 5 Theme, recalling a sadness

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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:27:00 PM
    Great love becomes Great comfort . My wife died in 09 and now when I think about her I always smile. It will be a comfort remembering her love . Be the person she always knew you were and are.

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 7:01:00 AM
    - Ohhh .... very beautiful poem to your mother Constance, I lost my mother two years ago ..... is sorely missed. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Very expressive and emotive work..I am glad that your mother told you of her love at the end...Sara

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Beautiful form and beautiful poem, Constance...Yes, you are fortunate to have had those words whispered to you...I think the reason was because you were the most important person in her life - Tim

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:16:00 PM
    awww, such a sad but beautiful tribute, my friend. Lovely form too. Have a wonderful Easter x

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:23:00 PM
    This is beautiful and a great tribute to your mother. Believe me - she is never far away from you. God bless you and have a Clorious Easter. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 12:55:00 PM
    I am just interested to know why this type of syllable count for this Melancholy form.Is there any particular reason .Should we write only sad poem in this form?

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 12:52:00 PM
    Very touching write by you here Constance in this new form.Excellent poem.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 12:12:00 PM
    I'm lucky to still have my Mom, and I do treasure every day we have together! This moment you have with your mother is very special and you will never forget it, I am sorry you had to lose your Mom, but at least you heard those tender words from her! This is a special poem my friend! I enjoyed reading it this afternoon! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:13:00 AM
    yes, Constance, you were very blessed to have that memory. When my mother passed, I did not arrive soon enough to tell her how much I loved her. Beautiful poem. hugs, Catie :)