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' When You and I Collide '

~~~~~ ~~~~~ ===================================== Rainbow hue - viewed Heart is screwed - fell Now, glued in her... Oh, love, love ... LOVE Like white dove flew above my sense... You're a flower That showers me With sour-sweet warmth... =====================================

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Date: 8/13/2011 12:09:00 PM
congrats on your sweet than bauk love poem.
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/12/2011 10:40:00 AM
jun,this is beautiful! Many congrats on your great win
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:31:00 AM
hey jun-jun congrats on your win, David
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:29:00 PM
Good idea Jun. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:52:00 PM
congratulations jun jun on your win here
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:46:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your top ten victory with new form and great poetry luv.. enjoy..wow..
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest . Love,CarolJun-Jun
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Date: 8/11/2011 6:43:00 PM
love, love....LOVE! Great write, jun-jun!
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Date: 8/11/2011 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, jun-jun
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:31:00 PM
Thanks for the entry to my contest, jun=jun
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Date: 8/6/2011 11:07:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, jun-jun
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