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Magic dust shooting into starlight pearls as the scents begin wafting Around the planet's curve circling warmly embracing on vision Glittering golden gleams sparkle through colours of a promise Kissed green eyes to hide her warm tears open up In the promises we give to others for keeps Rainbows hold until the end enchanting tales Silk buried softly underneath the bouquet a rose grows Not forgetting the inner promises we give unto ourselves Romancing a poem under the pillow no one knows Petals freezing winter moon holding warmly drunken Wrapped up under one star winks cotton white angel holding deeply wings Held upright pleasing the heart pure soul inside the glory of the stars shine Fear and destruction of earthly paradise we live Over and back dancing butterflies waltz freely taken We need beautiful fairy tales and angels songs As the sun rise kisses a gold circle treasures found A man can not be changed by place or time, but of love Memories are born inside where a diamond cut princess dwells Luxurious and delicious feelings ~ enveloped softly in your wing A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 15.12.2016 (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/17/2017 2:45:00 AM
- A pleasure to share this poem with you, Liam - Thank you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2017 3:24:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 1/13/2017 3:16:00 PM
Magnificently beautiful.
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