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' Wake Up '

apathy benumbed, chaotic deeds embroidered friendships gnawed, hatred indurated jiffy keen loss met, noble outrage preserved queries repudiated, songs tuned unheard vague wisdom exalts, youth zzzzzzzzzzzz.......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/28/2011 11:03:00 PM
Amazing verse Jun Jun, I'm not familiar with the ABC thing but hope to giv it a try. You did a fantastic job.
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Date: 7/28/2011 12:14:00 PM
wow, just wow. I liked this alot, nice ending
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:13:00 AM
like it jun-jun, good ending, David
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:06:00 AM
a visuall feast, jun... enjoyed the surprising zzzzzzz..:) hugggs, nette
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