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- On the Right Side of the Moon -

Loving you is easy as the heart sings into your heaven Come kiss me sugar before the snow melts Stunning visions before the mirrors a flame sparks As two white doves in eternal faithfulness weld us together Standing an adoring torch within a breathtaking ray of sunlight Dreams that were answered, within soft tenderness beauty and love Always when you enter number one smiles Love's paradise ruby wine flows warm I will forever find you interesting sweet dreams as you make me forget everything that lies behind Many moons searching distant horizons Coming out slowly from the light my dear As I stared into the stars thoughts within you entered Brilliant beauty a miracle dawns new horizons Darling captivating your precious light holds me Each time seeing you is like I have known you a lifetime beyond anything We travel down the starlit path only for eternity Heaven's whisper creating our future and dreams A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 24.02.2016 (unrhymed couplets)

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Date: 4/5/2016 10:46:00 AM
a collab at its finest, liam.. huggs
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Date: 4/5/2016 6:21:00 AM
What an amazing poem. i love it
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Date: 4/4/2016 10:22:00 PM
Captivating couplets
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:50:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:52:00 PM
Very very romantic.
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:49:00 PM
- This gem I know very well, a pleasure to write with you dear friend Liam - a beautiful poem that belongs to my heart - Best wishes for you and your loved ones :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:42:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful breathtaking imagery Anne Lise and Liam I do love your wonderful collaborations:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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