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Musk Smells Coming

Musk smells coming Musk smells coming From Andromeda's navel Blue moon is drifting Everything unearthly The shadow embraces me Soft breasts steely **** Squeezy little imps. And bed of darkness Yellow carpet Velvet sheets fingers wiggling My body aches In voluptuous climbing Earth crumbles To shreds. Now the body releases soul Dead nerves skittle And her lips melt In the first morning sun Hotsy Totsy - Poetry Contest Sponsor Rachel Firmin 15 February, 2015

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Date: 2/16/2015 7:31:00 AM
Hmmmn...deeply sensuous and languorous. Still, there's a touch of humor..."squeezy little imps"!. As always, you have a unique style all your own, Rajat my friend. More smiles from the land of thousand isles... :) Kim
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:27:00 AM
Very deep pen Rajat! Very raw and powerful piece, my dearest friend. GL in the contest! A 7 from me! In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) xxx D" Reply
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:10:00 AM
- wooow, Rajat - really deep and well written - I wish you best of luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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