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Dreamy Silhouette

When you have a beautiful beaming dream enter the mouth smiles as together we drift away As a moon face gets brighter accepting new beginnings Flowers sway in your breathless air synchronized by the spring music warmly breathing out sighs Softly sunshine lifts our spirits free Walking upon the yellow brick road joining hands fingertips hold intertwining swans forever mate Beauty on wings regal passion poesy on silk flowing sheets Floating warmly dancing butterflies skip under the tenderness softly embracing Sharing sweet fluttering kisses from early morn unto late night Heartbeats skip into one fire joining souls in flowery band of white anemones binding us together one garland Under a bridge bending heaven's sunshine colour baptised love A Collaborated Poem 05.04.2016 Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :)

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Date: 5/7/2016 10:04:00 AM
Beneficial collaboration. Nice flow and rhythm. Words in sentences appear jumbled (as if AI chosen); but, simultaneously, expertly placed (if that makes any sense).... :-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2016 11:42:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and comments, Tom :) - I greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/8/2016 11:10:00 AM
My dear friends, Anne Lise and Liam, a glowingly beautiful poem of love! A super 7 Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/8/2016 11:27:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, dear Leonora - Thanks for friendly visits a super 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2016 9:14:00 AM
Very uplifting , thanh you for sharing **RON**
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:42:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, Ronny - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ronny Madonsela
Date: 4/7/2016 9:14:00 AM
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Date: 4/7/2016 6:53:00 AM
Nice one. I really enjoyed it
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/7/2016 8:47:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and comments, Owen :) - I greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2016 1:28:00 AM
you made me swoon again, anne and liam!...how endearing!.huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/7/2016 8:46:00 AM
- Nette, thank you for reading and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2016 1:21:00 PM
You two painted a very pleasant and romantic picture...very moving
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Date: 4/6/2016 1:42:00 PM
- I greatly appreciate your visit :) - Tim, thank you for reading and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2016 11:07:00 AM
Hi Anee, It's superb. Entire piece is enriched with English literature.You painted very brilliantly the beauty of nature.Thanks a lot for enhancing our pleasure.............hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/6/2016 12:56:00 PM
- Manmath thank you for reading and comments, I greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2016 10:59:00 AM
Anne Lise and Liam, a beautiful write, and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:33:00 AM
- B.W. a new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comments, greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2016 9:11:00 AM
Another beautiful poem by the both of you. You've done it so much you have become the same thought. I really enjoyed this one. Great write for both. Peace:)
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Date: 4/6/2016 11:32:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me, Daniel :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2016 5:58:00 AM
Lovely indeed!
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Date: 4/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Abdullah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2016 2:14:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful romantic poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:13:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comment it, greatly appreciate your visit Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2016 9:20:00 PM
A lovely romantic write
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:12:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comment it, greatly appreciate your visit Gail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2016 5:48:00 PM
your ink flowed beautiful in this anne lise thank you dear pal for the pleasure of joining pens wishing you a blessing of a week
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:14:00 AM
- Thank you dear friend Liam :) - ............ love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2016 3:47:00 PM
Simply beautiful! So romantic--So very well done. Sorry have not been around lately and am now happily back!
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:12:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2016 3:28:00 PM
Inundation of love in two beautiful hearts floating in that. Excellent poem my lovely lovely friend. A sweet 7 sure. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:12:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2016 2:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your collaboration with Liam..Way to go you two..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:11:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2016 2:35:00 PM
Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:10:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and commet it, greatly appreciate your visit Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2016 2:22:00 PM
oh such stunning imagery Anne Lise this is absolutely beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/6/2016 5:10:00 AM
- A new co-write by Liam and me :) - Thank you for reading and comment it, greatly appreciate your visit Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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