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- In the Power of Death and the Depths of Darkness -

In order to obtain true freedom in our lives Close your eyes and see the light of an angel Wondering what this life is really all about That it will guide you to a brighter place without turns Thoughts about the night with a last kiss will be my end As night becomes desperate to sleep Tenderly rocked in your loving arms Seduced by the dark side hiding ghosts roam Desperation within hopeless pleas, the angel wings are broken After walking on coals fired inside aches burning It hurts so bad, the emotions of losing control Show me the way love in true heavenly beauties charm Let's break the chains burning without fire In your power shines a beacon starlight The pain, the demons leave inside causing our sins Strong within it's beam pierces through the gates of hell I can hardly breathe, in this dream where nobody dies Forgiving past sins kisses everything better The eyes are not blind, a rainbow of sorrow shines Breaking free from chains of a pain linked curse Could it be we have chosen exactly the right words of love I am not your resistance building castles in the sky without storms Born in the republic swept away within a dream I'll walk with you through the age of eternities golden gate bridge A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 18.06.2016 (unrhymed Quatrain) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 6/28/2016 10:07:00 AM
Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful,deep,dark, mostly sad love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A very beautiful, heartfelt, love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is very beautiful.Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just amazing!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 6/28/2016 6:32:00 AM
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 6/28/2016 7:40:00 AM
Sorry pal I copied and pasted my mistake passing you a warm smile thanks Anne lise wishing you a blessing of a week

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