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- In the Night You Came -

Red roses on a white painted wall Bushes decorative a beauty of eye They are not forgotten ... recalls smell Night heaven makes the mystery blue Snowflakes dancing pleasure is beautiful in deep silence Dead roses are frozen A white veil hanging from the trees a landscape almost like a fairy tale Thoughts seeking the adventure mighty castle Snowflakes and wind whizzing Winter's cold frozen ballet Beautiful graceful and soft pirouettes 24.11.2013 A-L Andresen :) (1st place in the contest)

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/18/2014 11:38:00 PM

This poem is very beautiful and quite breathtaking. There seems to be a little bit of sadness in these words, as well. I really enjoyed this amazing poem, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2014 2:04:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Kelly - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 2/14/2014 2:47:00 AM

This is a beautiful and very impressive write from you my very dear friend of mine, Anne Lise! I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing!.And, my hearty congratulations on your great win! Cheers and big hugs! I'm stopping by also to greet u & your loved ones a very Happy Valentines Day! Wish u all the best! Thank u so much for everything esp. your kindness, support, love, friendship & everything! More blessings to u esp. this Hearts Day! love and misses u, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2014 2:52:00 AM

- A big heart is sent back to you my friend Leonora! - Thanks for visiting and greeting, - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/13/2014 8:14:00 AM

Ah, I love this one! It's such a pleasing one.. Congrats Annelise on a beautiful poem and win! hugs..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2014 8:29:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Gautami - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/13/2014 3:34:00 AM

Congrats Anne on win with this leading work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2014 3:37:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Kayod5 - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/12/2014 3:48:00 PM

simply lovely Anne Lise congrats on win hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2014 3:50:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Shadow - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 2/12/2014 9:07:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2014 11:51:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Joseph - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2014 11:50:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Dr. Ram - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/12/2014 9:07:00 AM

Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win, anne

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/12/2014 7:35:00 AM

W O W Anne-Lise, sounds like some fairy tale Knight... arrived on that night L O L)) best wishes on the winning..'

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2014 7:43:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Joe - always nice when someone will read my poems that have been rewarded with a win :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Luna Amjua

Date: 12/22/2013 9:07:00 AM

Hello thank you for your comment! I love this one it makes me think of the first day its snows when everything is quite.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2013 9:09:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, sweet new friend Yessica. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paddi March

Date: 12/17/2013 2:36:00 PM

You really capture the feel of snow, a delight for me is that deep,deep silence that comes with gently falling snow. It transports you to another world. It is a lovely poem. I do not know any place (or how) i can write to you to thank you for the comments that you have made on some of my poems. Your latest comment on "Remnants" pleased me a lot. I had intended it for a contest on "Hands" but I couldn't stop writing so now its too long. Thank you Anne lise for your lovely comments

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2013 2:44:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, sweet new friend Paddi. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lekau Mamabolo

Date: 11/27/2013 5:53:00 AM

Great imagination, keep up the good work, Lekau

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 6:04:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Lekau. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/27/2013 3:09:00 AM

still dreamy from this piece, anne... is it cold there now?.. happy day and huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 3:17:00 AM

..... the snow came .... then it rain away.... :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2013 2:15:00 AM

I love all these images of white. Came by to say happy thanksgiving though you probably don't have that holiday. Luv ya, Andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 2:48:00 AM

- No Thanksgiving in Norway ! - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jay Loveless

Date: 11/26/2013 11:16:00 PM

A lovely image :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 2:47:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Jay. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/26/2013 7:58:00 PM

very nice Anne Lise ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 2:47:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/26/2013 6:40:00 PM

a lovely portrait painted Anne Lise so well captured is winter kudos Shadow x smile hug

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 2:46:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/26/2013 4:25:00 PM

A breathtaking winter scene that you have described here, Anne-Lise! I really loved it! Wonderful work!...Thank you so much for the great comments. I really do appreciate it!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2013 2:46:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 11/26/2013 2:11:00 PM

Glad to be inside reading this lovely winter's view. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2013 2:13:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Daver. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/26/2013 11:50:00 AM

Hi Anne, A most lovely winter delight! Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2013 12:10:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/26/2013 8:35:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful images of winter. Love the roses contrasted with the snow. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2013 10:19:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/26/2013 7:06:00 AM

a very beautifully drawn piece dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2013 7:23:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit,Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 11/25/2013 6:49:00 PM

Snowflakes and wind whizzing Winter's cold frozen ballet Beautiful graceful and soft pirouettes So beautiful my dear Anne..I love it <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2013 3:46:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Fatima. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 11/25/2013 6:37:00 PM

These winter scenes are like fairy tales..such a pretty poem....thank you for all your inspiring comments Anne Lise...you are so kind

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2013 3:46:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2013 3:07:00 PM

beautiful, my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2013 3:09:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2013 12:16:00 PM

Very descriptive of a winter scene..I enjoye reeading this one today..I noticed that you had commented..Gratitude flows from my pen to your page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2013 12:28:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)