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' Heaven Knows '

======================================== ~*~ Shutter captured lady in the rail Sitting in the midst of her woe Feels like a demon ... Beelzebub? fail? Shutter captured lady in the rail In her being, sins are in veil Myriad tears now pouring, herself is her foe Shutter captured lady in the rail Sitting in the midst of her woe ... Fallen angel from heaven's gate Inundate with dewdrops of tears Sent to seek for her humanly fate Fallen angel from heaven's gate To discern the worth of her blasphemy's weight Heart's now bonded with God - sky clears Fallen angel from heaven's gate Inundate with dewdrops of tears ... ========================================= *-* jun-jun villanueva *-* IN THE AFTERGLOW *-* contest entry *-* sponsored by nette onclaud

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Date: 8/15/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:38:00 PM
Your way with words is captivating me, jun-jun. Nice write, congrats!
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,jun-jun
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:32:00 PM
JUN-jun, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:22:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on taking fourth place in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry luv..enjoy..
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Date: 8/7/2011 1:11:00 AM
Wow such emotion...I love poems like these. Good Luck in the contest, you have a good chance!!
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Date: 8/6/2011 10:55:00 PM
Wonderful write Lovely lady loved it...with love...old Jack
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