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Spirits and ghosts in haunted places Elves, witches, vampires and goblins The night is black as a gigantic and unfathomable dark hole A night of magic and excitement The souls of the dead, disguised in costumes Witches who want to take their revenge and blood thirsty vampires Eerie feeling and goosebumps A being passing by with his head under his arm Hear rattling chains and screams Devilish laughter touch my senses is it the dead leaves from the yard tree Heavy, cracking step on the stairs ... The entrance door opens slowly .. A gust of cold autumn air fills the room ... .... I smile ... it's Halloween 08.09.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Sponsor Russell Sivey Contest Name Everything Halloween Deadline 10/24/2013 12:00:00 AM

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Date: 10/28/2013 10:46:00 AM
nice poem! The day is almost here :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2013 12:04:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Arturo..... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 10/9/2013 10:33:00 PM
Great descriptions of the spookier Halloween costumes. Good luck in the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2013 4:20:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Eric..... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/22/2013 9:00:00 AM
SPOOKY! I don't think I'm going to stick my head out the door this Halloween. Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2013 11:29:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Daver..... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/19/2013 9:21:00 PM
good luck fair lady. . .
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2013 3:05:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Morgan..... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/19/2013 6:28:00 PM
one of my Favorite Halloween poems I have read on this site ! Great job , 7
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2013 3:04:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Yvette.... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/19/2013 5:23:00 PM
Good luck in russell's contest!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2013 3:04:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Karen.... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/18/2013 5:43:00 PM
you have penned this one brilliantly...the season comes to life through your words! Good luck in the contest :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2013 2:03:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Sandra.... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/15/2013 2:32:00 PM
Nicely conceived dear AnneLise. Good job on the imagery portrayed.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2013 3:01:00 PM
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:15:00 PM
Well Stephen King could not do any better than this ...Good one Anne
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:24:00 PM
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Date: 9/15/2013 1:00:00 AM
all the little passion of a halloween night wonderful work god bless xxx duncan
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2013 3:16:00 AM
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:36:00 AM
Advance Happy Halloween!!! ! can feel it! the autumn's air...you said it all...I've been watching horror movies alone in my room last week...and some of the lines are included in the movie :) good luck in the contest..Have a nice day friend Anne :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2013 9:48:00 AM
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Date: 9/10/2013 5:56:00 AM
Your writing continues to amaze me... I don't come here often enough! I will remedy that! Big warm hus, Jack xoxox
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2013 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2013 9:56:00 PM
What a scary hair rising write you have written Anne. In this category you have done a deep dive without a splash getting ten out of ten. Wonderful work my friend and thank you for your sweet comments on my Song Poem. Hope you would like the Video already placed of this Song on You Tube. Love and best wishes always.... Ravindra..A. L. A
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2013 1:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2013 3:47:00 PM
I love Halloween, and I loved this poem!....This was very suspenseful to read, and I liked how it ended!....Wonderful work, Anne-Lise!....Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "Trick or Treat"...I am so glad that you have Halloween in Norway! Have fun this year!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2013 1:57:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2013 1:12:00 PM
SHIVERS are racing down my spine! I can really feel the eerie atmosphere...we don't celebrate halloween in my country, so i hope its not as spooky as its depicted here lol...Best wishes for the contest! -YLN
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 1:22:00 PM
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Date: 9/9/2013 1:11:00 PM
that's a creepy Holloween poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you,Hugs!Erich
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 1:21:00 PM
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Date: 9/9/2013 10:27:00 AM
this gives me the chiils, anna lise... a ghoulish kind of mood with a hint of charm in the end!.. that's what halloween is all about; whooo!.. cherish your day!..:) huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 10:29:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2013 10:25:00 AM
Gets me in the mood for Halloween! I love it! Molly
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 10:26:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2013 9:23:00 AM
Scary and creepy , but always creative ! Enjoyed your spooky write ! :)) xoxo~Saanvi
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 9:44:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2013 6:23:00 AM
I like Halloween for the pleasure and delight of spooky characters and sweets. Such an odd holiday ..love the poem :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 6:52:00 AM
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Date: 9/9/2013 5:56:00 AM
Very descriptive poetry of Halloween Horrors... we choose not to celebrate it in our home... not true to our belief system, but the lighter side would be the fun in the dressing up.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 5:59:00 AM
No, celebration in my house either.:) - Thanks for the nice visit, Kim.... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/9/2013 3:44:00 AM
Very eerie work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 4:04:00 AM
- Sara, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2013 2:42:00 AM
Good luck and happy Halloween. .
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 3:42:00 AM
- Morgan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2013 1:36:00 AM
A stunning write my dear friend Anne Lise. A perfect entry for our friend Russell's contest theme and I think this can also be a perfect one with the free verse contest here. Free verse is one of my aspirations to write and I wish I can write one soon. You did this free verse poem extraordinarily well. I love it and so enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing & your very inspiring comments on my poem. Good luck & best wishes always! I'm @ work today but quite relaxed ;)) & here. love much, Leonora
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Date: 9/9/2013 1:50:00 AM
Ops, I'm sorry, I forgot. I'm coming back to leave you my biggest lovely hugs my very dear friend! love lots, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 1:39:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Leonora.... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
Date: 9/9/2013 12:22:00 AM
AMAZING write! WOW! You captured the essence of Halloween well, my dear. Spooky, eerie, and yet...there is that smile at the end. GOOD LUCK!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2013 12:33:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, Eileen.... always pleasant ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :o ()
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