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White Wolf

Date: 10/12/2016 3:18:00 AM

That is a wicked Haiku Anne-Lise! I've tried a couple but they don't roll off the tongue as good as this /|\

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/5/2016 12:51:00 PM

Absolutely right Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2016 1:37:00 PM

.... My first "Haiku" ..... which is not really a "Haiku" :) - Many thanks, Lenny - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/24/2013 10:24:00 PM

So much said in so few words. Bravo! Excellent advice. I will not let anyone else speak for me. Each person has a voice. Let each person speak for themselves.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2013 1:32:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2012 7:11:00 AM

Thank you Anne.... it was an honor to have you stop by my recent poem. Means pretty much... God Bless...luv PD

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2012 10:11:00 AM

pd. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Chris Lane

Date: 8/4/2012 2:23:00 PM

Anne, I really appreciate this! I believe this a golden rule in poetry and life as well..... Perfect! Take care Chris

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/4/2012 2:28:00 PM

Chris, thank you for visit and comments my haiku poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Steven Beesley

Date: 6/28/2012 6:35:00 PM

I love Haiku, this is a good one!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2012 1:46:00 AM

Steven, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 6/13/2012 1:24:00 AM

'' breathe- in experience ,breathe-out poetry''.I remember this famous quote now .nice and meaningful haiku .it conveys a great message to all poets .thank you for sharing .jk

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2012 1:27:00 AM

jk - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 6/9/2012 7:22:00 PM

Love your message in this,and thanks for stopping in on my ''Lisa'' poem.Never a day goes by I don't feel her presence.Even after 9 years...So sorry 4 your loss too,I am sure she was as special as you are dear~much love~Kacey

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2012 3:29:00 AM

Kacey, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Doreen Wright

Date: 6/8/2012 5:32:00 PM

This speaks volumes. I love it :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2012 5:36:00 PM

Doreen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nathan D.

Date: 5/24/2012 10:36:00 AM

awesome ,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2012 10:45:00 AM

Nathan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

John Lipari

Date: 5/2/2012 5:35:00 AM

Poetry poison! Be your own poet...I love your message here!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/2/2012 5:38:00 AM

John, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/27/2012 11:39:00 PM

Come see your poem in my blog!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2012 4:11:00 AM

Thank you .... I am honored!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

W. D. Thomas

Date: 4/25/2012 1:38:00 PM

You are so talented. I'm still thinking of strawberries because of your poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2012 2:13:00 PM

W.D. - thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Terry O'Leary

Date: 4/25/2012 3:34:00 AM

Good advice... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2012 7:05:00 AM

Terry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

James Fraser

Date: 3/17/2012 10:51:00 AM

Words of Wisdom indeed Anne Lise, well said - many hugs for you :) xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/17/2012 12:47:00 PM

Thank you James for vicit,hugs and comments.- oxox love Anne-Lise

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/5/2012 11:24:00 AM

What a meanigful write! Hope you keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2012 11:28:00 AM

Thank you Matthew...I do the best I can. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Chuck Novotny

Date: 3/5/2012 12:21:00 AM

An excellent work. Insightful and intuitive. - Chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2012 2:16:00 AM

Thank you Chuck for reading my haiku. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jemmy Farmer

Date: 2/29/2012 6:41:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I love reading good haiku especially those like this one that make you think. Much enjoyed! Jemmy x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/29/2012 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Jemmy for reading it. - oxox Anne-Lise

Jim Pemberton

Date: 2/29/2012 5:25:00 AM

Thank your for your thoughtful words and heart touching poems!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/29/2012 5:37:00 AM

Thank you Jim. - oxox Anne-Lise

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/27/2012 2:53:00 AM

good advice, Anne Lisa, although i must admit to being inspired, by others especially here on soup. love your poem. harry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/27/2012 3:28:00 AM

Thank you Harry. - oxox love Anne-Lise

James Fraser

Date: 2/25/2012 5:16:00 PM

We are the writers of thoughts, Prophets we may be? We surely allow, our written words to be seen. It's down to the reader, to decipher our thoughts, when our words are past down, then our thoughts have been taught. Powerful and short Anne Lise :) James xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2012 7:34:00 AM

Thank you James. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 2/24/2012 1:39:00 AM

So true, but suggestion is always good. Like how you are trying to use the haiku 5-7-5 form for this. (Be on guard though it's easy to get caught up in the moment and forget to count - I've fallen fail to this tme and again...? ;D)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2012 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Anna-Marie. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Don Johnson

Date: 2/23/2012 2:51:00 PM

true enough its in the word, put out by mouth an often heard...enough...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2012 1:17:00 AM

Thank you Don. - oxox Anne-Lise

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/23/2012 7:53:00 AM

Nice poem - but I think you shoud have said "others". Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/23/2012 9:25:00 AM

Thank you Matthew. - oxox Anne-Lise

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/22/2012 6:47:00 AM

Beautiful write and a great advice. Many thanks for your kind comments on my short Poem. Hope you have seen its link Photo as well without that perhaps the Poem is incomplete. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra......Anne Lise Andresen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2012 6:57:00 AM

Thank you Ravindra. - Anne-Lise