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- Give Me the Eternity -

The longing for a deep red ruby creeps like an ivy in my heart Love me today - love me tomorrow Sparks sensors from a sensitive heart Give me the eternity Like a lost child you take my hand Heart demons in angels inner circle brought me into beautiful golden moonlight Take me with you ... in perfection ... the divinity Hot bodies close together The silence encourager ... weak breath A deep red ruby is perfect - a beauty The eternity - how long is that 07.12.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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C. Thomas Iv

Date: 12/26/2013 6:49:00 AM

AY YAAAAAA Anne Lise this is a ruby red piece itself lol. Beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/26/2013 7:52:00 AM

:)))

C. Thomas Iv
Date: 12/26/2013 6:55:00 AM

Oh, this is FJ Thomas (Flo); needed an adult acct for poems I am not ready for my daughter to see just yet ;)

Wendy Meyer

Date: 12/22/2013 4:17:00 AM

It seems with this one, eternity is something or someone near yet so far. It's like a dream, yet certainly a possibility anytime or beyond mortality. May you find it my friend, and cherish it. Love, Wendy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2013 6:22:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Wendy - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Taylor Woodall

Date: 12/20/2013 7:47:00 PM

Beautiful. I love this it makes me want love and is so cute<3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/21/2013 6:57:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Taylor - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 12/12/2013 8:45:00 AM

Beautiful and touching poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2013 10:33:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Vesna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/12/2013 6:40:00 AM

7 stars Anne-Lise You are Poetry!! One off topic question, Where's Becca Lucas?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2013 7:45:00 AM

... I do not know where Becca are........... - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/11/2013 7:38:00 AM

Romantic and beautiful. Your words are perfection.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2013 10:22:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2013 2:58:00 PM

very romantic. and I love the ending question: how long is that. If you ever stop to consider eternity, it is mind blowing!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2013 3:44:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 12/10/2013 2:21:00 PM

Very steamy, Anne!...and kind of dreamy, too...Well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/11/2013 3:44:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Caleb. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/9/2013 2:13:00 PM

Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2013 2:24:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 12/8/2013 8:06:00 PM

Anne Lise this is such a sweet poem...the take me with you..in perfection....what a dreamy line!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2013 2:40:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 12/8/2013 4:23:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this heartfelt work of yours. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2013 2:40:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, A.O. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cinzia Guerci

Date: 12/8/2013 1:02:00 PM

Pure passion

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 1:04:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Cinzia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/8/2013 11:25:00 AM

wonderful write Anne...thank you for stopping by....hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 11:59:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Christine Phillips

Date: 12/8/2013 8:40:00 AM

A lovely poem depicting the heart of a lovely Anne Lise. Continue to shower your readers with love. Love is a very powerful too that can reach beyond the imaginary line and bring peace to the heart mind body and soul. Nice love verse.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:46:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Christine. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/8/2013 8:39:00 AM

A very beautiful and romantic poem well crafted by your very creative words my dear friend Anne Lise. I'm so glad & my honor to read again tonight one of your stellar writes. Thank you so much! Have a grace-filled weekend to you and your love ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:45:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 12/8/2013 7:30:00 AM

Lovely work of art Anne Lise. Loved the energy I felt in your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Mustapha. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/8/2013 7:18:00 AM

very beautiful picture painted

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/8/2013 4:50:00 AM

Lovely romantic write on longing and love, Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:24:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Matose

Date: 12/8/2013 1:50:00 AM

You've made my Sunday brilliant. Thanks for sharing. JM

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:24:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sarai Virden

Date: 12/8/2013 12:49:00 AM

Your descriptions woven are always so enchanting sweet Anne - Lise... Something within compels me to believe that eternity will come for us all. Such a tender piece from your shinning heart. Sincere hugs XOXOX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:23:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Sarai. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/8/2013 12:41:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully said. Great poetry. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:23:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Ravi. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2013 5:55:00 PM

You must have read all the hot ones! ;) Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:22:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson

Date: 12/7/2013 4:57:00 PM

great poetry Anne-Lise xox

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2013 4:58:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Julie Heckman

Date: 12/7/2013 2:53:00 PM

what a gorgerous, striking, lovelypoem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2013 3:18:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Julie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/7/2013 2:37:00 PM

my goodness, anne.. such eternal bliss within your heart and lines.. beautiful!.. blessed be this coming sunday!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2013 2:40:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit on my poem: - Give Me The Eternity - Much appreciated your comments, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)