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- Every Breath You Take -

To get my heart in the right rhythm, I have to catch your inner you Holding hands kiss colors inside sunshine warm paradise Together we share our dreams with a glass of pink champagne Celebrating a living memory of eternal beauty sparkling gems glisten We will find ourselves in an everlasting magical journey Where the golden barley shakes silken softly whispers in our breeze I'll walk with you through ages of time Uniting as one shadow embraced dancing silver treasure Pure angel of dawn, you've stolen my heart Weightless without body floating beautiful falling inside the soul's desire Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 18.04.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/10/2015 1:19:00 AM

This collaboration is a wonderful choice for Poem of the Week. Congratulations to you both! 7

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/9/2015 3:43:00 PM

Your poem glows with beautiful imagery and warm romance...congrats on being chosen TPOW! So glad I didn't miss this one!! Hugs, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2015 3:41:00 AM

ohh my, a great tandem you both are, anne and liam... toast to your POTW award!.. huggs

Nandita Das

Date: 5/6/2015 3:21:00 AM

Congratulations on this being chosen as The Poem of the Week.Glad this beautiful poem was chosen as it's my favorite.

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/5/2015 12:21:00 PM

Many Congratulations to you Liam Mate!! and to Dear Anne-Lise on achieving "Poem of the Week" for the quite sensational couplet write. Quite Superb!! Best Always, Gary

Anmol Samal

Date: 5/5/2015 2:25:00 AM

A huge congratulations to you both.... the poem is very beautiful....

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2015 5:39:00 PM

poem of the week well deserved Anne Lise and Liam:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/3/2015 7:48:00 PM

Wow, I get to congratulate you both for the second time! Yes! Hugs to you Liam and Anne! Kim :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/3/2015 7:05:00 PM

Way to go both of you! Congratulations on this honor.

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/3/2015 2:26:00 PM

The two of you are great together and being poem of the week proves it, nicely done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/3/2015 1:03:00 PM

- "Poem of the Week" ... the second week! - The first time it has happened! - Awesome !!!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz

Date: 4/28/2015 12:24:00 PM

Nice and tender words in a poem which in my opinion is mostly prose very well penned

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2015 12:09:00 PM

- A happy surprise my friend Liam - Poem of the Week !!!! - I am more than 50% happy :))) - I am 110% happy !!!! - CONGRATULATIONS TO US !!!! - warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 4/26/2015 11:36:00 AM

Congrats on this being P.O.W on Anne-Lise's page.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2015 5:38:00 AM

- Of course, a 7 + fav !!!! - <3 & hugs

Nandita Das

Date: 4/26/2015 5:37:00 AM

Supremely beautiful n magical. A#7 n a favorite.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/26/2015 5:28:00 AM

A beautiful romantic freeverse in poetic wordings. U crafted in a swell way wow. Nice to read u again. Hope u will mine latest too.

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/25/2015 10:09:00 PM

Liam and Anne-Lise, Couplet verses of sheer beauty and magnificence . . . Truly a joy to read!! A "7"/FAV!! Best Always, Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 11:47:00 AM

gary great to see you pal i surely missed you being around passing you a warm smile wishing you and your lovely wife a blessed weekend

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 11:43:00 AM

thank you deeply catie for the beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed day

Tim Smith

Date: 4/25/2015 8:12:00 PM

So much romance ...lovely guys

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 11:30:00 AM

thank you tim dear pal for the beautiful comment wishing you a blessed day

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/25/2015 6:45:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and wonderful loving love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.I enjoy it!A real gem!Just awesome! I love it very much.A 7+++ to each!A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!To me you're the best in everything Liam.Congrats on this one being P.O.W on Anne-Lise's page!So happy for you guys!You both deserve it.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^"

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 11:27:00 AM

thank you ever so kindly dorian for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated wishing you a blessed day

Jan Allison

Date: 4/25/2015 6:27:00 PM

I remember the title from when Anne Lise posted it - such amazing imagery - absolutely stunning collaboration my friends:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 4/26/2015 11:25:00 AM

thank you jan always great hearing from you wonderful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed day