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- Dream Land -

Are you a dreamer A lonely dream about longing and love Dreaming of a country that no one knows Happiness and eternity Always a lonely dream Am I a clown, a lonely soul Would give anything for that the dream was free I am a lone rider in my dream Follow me in my dream and hold my hand Together in to my dreamland 10.08.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 12/12/2013 7:38:00 PM

Ok I chose this poem, because you haven't attempted the Villanelle on this site yet, grrrr, lol. I am pleasantly surprised, and it seems I'm the only one that doesn't know where that country is, at least from the advice I always get, anyway that shot will never get where it belongs. Great poem, I thoroughly enjoyed and relate to it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2013 7:41:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Wayland, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/6/2013 4:37:00 PM

A very dreamy and magical poem you have written here, Anne-Lise! I loved the simplicity of it and the flow of the words. Wonderful work!....You might like my poem, "Write This Way". You're poem reminded me of it...Thank you very much for the nice comments. Hope you have a peaceful weekend, too!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2013 4:46:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Kelly, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/19/2013 3:18:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, beautiful poem you have going here. Dreams certainly make life more interesting -getting lost in them works well as a reprieve from reality. Well penned.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2013 3:25:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Vicky, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/15/2013 4:20:00 PM

A dreamy poem, Anne Lise... Dream on... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2013 1:27:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Terry, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson

Date: 8/15/2013 3:20:00 AM

love is sweet but incomplete, without the thought of you :] well don babe...xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 3:33:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Don. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/15/2013 12:25:00 AM

WOW such a nice and lovely poem... thank you sweet Anne.. for sharing your fabulous write.. :) nice day :) Sk

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2013 1:48:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Saanvi Dua

Date: 8/13/2013 1:30:00 PM

oh ! how I wish there was a Dreamland ! love , Saanvi :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 2:04:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Saanvi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/13/2013 12:19:00 PM

So your a lonely dreamer? Aww... I'll go to your dreamland then, and hold your hand. :o) xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 12:21:00 PM

- Thank you for your comments,your hand and visit, Dan. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)))

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/13/2013 7:43:00 AM

Reminds me of this song sung by this young man that my Danish friend introduced me to...Dream Land. We listened to the CD over and over as we went all over enchanting Denmark. Thanks for the invitation to walk through Dreamland with you, Anne Lise...I'm sure you are a WONDERFUL tour guide! hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 7:50:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Eileen. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery

Date: 8/12/2013 11:26:00 PM

what a onderful write Anne ...i enjoyed reading your work again as i use to long time back...hope ur doing well...cheers !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 12:56:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Red. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 8/12/2013 3:46:00 PM

Ah...we shall meet in poet dream land...wonderful poem Anne Lise....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 12:56:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Donna. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2013 3:39:00 PM

this is very nice, Anne lise. Haven't seen you in a while!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 12:55:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Andrea. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2013 9:52:00 AM

thanks for dropping by, anne... dream on and have a nice rest after a travelling..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2013 10:03:00 AM

- thank you, my sweet friend Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/12/2013 3:39:00 AM

Lone rider..Can i jon in this dream..Very beautiful poem.Are you on holiday still dear?Enjoy it to your utmost.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2013 4:52:00 AM

.. No, I came home Saturday night .... end of holiday :(( - Thank you for your comments and visit, Charma. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))

Dalila Agtani

Date: 8/11/2013 10:40:00 PM

Anne-Lise Thanks for sharing this piece! I am a dreamer, I can remember my dreams when I was 10 years old...to go places! It came to reality...let's follow our dreams A-L! Love Dalila

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2013 1:56:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Dalila. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/11/2013 5:06:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely poem. It gave me a nice dreamy feel and one of solitude. Solitude can be enjoyed when you're alone or with someone. Nice work :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2013 1:55:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Karen. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/11/2013 1:53:00 PM

No need to dream, Anne-Lise. It's here and now. Beautiful as always. Have an awesome Sunday too :). Love ya, Toquyen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 2:03:00 PM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Toquyen. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

Date: 8/11/2013 1:50:00 PM

Indeed I love to dream,I dream almost every night, That's a lovel y expressed poem,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 2:03:00 PM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Erich. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 8/11/2013 1:43:00 PM

I would like to have a dream like that. But with chocolate. Lots and lots of chocolate. I'll wait for your invitation. Enjoyed your poem Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 1:45:00 PM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Jon. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

Date: 8/11/2013 1:22:00 PM

Beautiful poem here Anne! i am following you in your dream.Thanks for visiting my page.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 1:31:00 PM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Kash. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Litan Dey

Date: 8/11/2013 12:35:00 PM

I just flow in dreams with your dream.....lovely write .I enjoyed your dreams

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 12:38:00 PM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Litan. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/11/2013 8:39:00 AM

This sounds like a lovely place to be. Dreams are a necessity to fuel our tomorrows. Nicely done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 10:17:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Drake. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2013 8:25:00 AM

i would love to be in that dreamland, anne... hope you enjoyed your vacation... what a mellow, lovely piece.. best of sunday to you..;) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 10:16:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Nette. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/11/2013 7:43:00 AM

wonderful write Anne...sweet dreams...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 10:16:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit,Joseph. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/11/2013 6:50:00 AM

Dreaming of "happiness and eternity".. Love that line Anne Lise :) hope you are having a blessed Sunday.. xxhugsxx Wilma

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2013 6:54:00 AM

- Thank you for your comments and visit, Wilma. - means a lot to get feedback. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)