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- Burning With Love -

Falling, laughing orange sunshine Warmly comforting beams caress I was blinded for a moment Lost searching faraway grace A color the Angels have ordained ? Butterflies dancing on each heartbeat I have to feel your tender touch Cotton fingertips electric sparks embrace The days they pass so quickly now Watching night and day pass The splendid color of the sky Heavens purity through lens of one soul A blazing light upon the shores Golden treasure your light shines All of God's creation, painted with his brush Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise Of life, that seems almost too much Far beyond our human brain to explain Somewhere very near, just around the corner Hope dances with the never ending dream Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 11.09.2015

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Date: 10/18/2015 7:03:00 PM
Another beautiful superb collaboration. "All of God's creation, painted with his brush Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise" My favorite within the gem you two very talented poets created! A7
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Date: 9/22/2015 7:05:00 AM
Hello Liam and Anne-Lise!! A Most Outstanding collaboration here with superb imagery and a most wonderful flow among the verses. "Rainbow misted angel tears a bouquet promise," is one of many memorable gems in this exquisite free-verse write. Very Well-Done my two great friends!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/21/2015 3:45:00 PM
This a beautifully written collaboration. The imagery is so vivid.. it shines and dances with every line. Excellent write Liam and Ann-Lise #7 ~~X~~
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Date: 9/20/2015 6:38:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Ann- Lise! Wow! A most beautiful, romantic and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it. A true golden gem!Just awesome!A very beautiful dreamy passionate sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful!I love it! Very enchanting.Great imagery! Excellent collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each!A Fav!Sending you my prayers Liam.Keep your Faith!Thank you for posting this very beautiful poem in your page too Liam.I'm so happy you did:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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