A Yellow Color

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This poem was inspired by the contest of my dear friend, Andrea Dietrich.

Keeps our hope burning As we take our future glimpse It glows like a sun Many things you understand It outshines the things around May 14, 2013 11.10pm Note: This is not for the contest. It went against the rules.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2013 4:12:00 PM

I know by your spirit yellow is your favorite color... stopping by to leave smiles on this poem again...:-)...:-)...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2013 10:35:00 PM

I know your favorite color now... Leo, thank you for the everlasting outshining image... your the best... Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2013 3:05:00 PM

ok, I can read this one then!!! It is a sweet poem, but I hope you are watching your syllable counts on the one you put in my contest. thanks for reading my poetry the other day, Leonora. I have been so busy lately. I really want to catch up here and it's been difficult. How are you, sweetie?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2013 11:49:00 AM

- As you ..... glows like a sun - Beautiful poem, Leonora. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/14/2013 10:56:00 AM

I love the yellow entries, even if yours isn't an entry I treat it as if it is, and this one is a tremendous one! I totally loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon my friend! What a pleasant piece, Great Work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/14/2013 10:42:00 AM

love this contest or not, wonderful poetry...