A Tale of Love Not Well Told

Mosses dabbed gray Silver moon above shines blind Owl hoots distant rats Drag glum silence of blood A tale of love not well told

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/26/2015 3:12:00 AM

More please more tge third oine is wow!.. olive eloisa

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/26/2015 12:14:00 PM

Thanks Olive. Have you read" Olive is green-a tribute"? Read this and comment. Love>rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/25/2015 5:08:00 AM

Hello Rajat! Very sadness written pen Rajat! Tanka as always so well penned in your own style.A 7 from me! Hope all well with you my dearest friend. I. Wish you a very lovely Sunday! Gid bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxxx D. ^O^

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/26/2015 12:16:00 PM

Thanks Sweet D.Your lovely comments always inspires me.Your friend Rajat

Skat A

Date: 1/24/2015 11:59:00 PM

Love the tanka. SKAT

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/26/2015 12:17:00 PM

Lovely inspiring comments SKAT>love>rajat

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2015 7:23:00 PM

Oh but I need more to know what's happening? more please. Light & Love

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/26/2015 12:12:00 PM

Debbie I would write a poem for you where the story of love will be well told. In fact I am a crazy poet.My love has also a crazy shape. I write poems when and only when bugs dictate me to do so.My poems are also bug shaped..small..microscopic.Debbie my lovely friend I believe because of friends like you I have endeavored to write something whatever merits they have.Love Debbie.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2015 2:43:00 PM

Interesting work..I wonder if rats tremble in their boots when they hear the Owl hoot?..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2015 11:55:00 AM

- Better said, than not :)) - I wish you a lovely weekend,Rajat :) - // Anne-Lise :)