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- a Sky Full of Colors -

She closes her eyes ... daydreaming A princess who takes on her glass shoes Takes your hand and leads you to an unknown place she'll get you to the place you will remember and never will forget she will let you get far enough High up in the sky of hope, faith and love Oh, where is the color that wrapped her head Not a sky full of stars ... a sky filled with millions of colorful umbrellas Just try to imagine ... the rainbow that shines Soar among the clouds in the umbrellas. . . Your feet never touches the ground Does this sound silly - you feel like an fool Now she sings every day. . . high up among the clouds in her purple umbrella - playing with the rainbow and sends her daydreams to you VISUAL # 4 Sponsor Nette Onclaud Contest Name Symbolism: THE UMBRELLA Deadline 3/21/2014 12:00:00 AM (5th in the contest) 24.02.2014 A-L Andresen :)

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 3/7/2014 9:21:00 PM

This truly deserved the win,congrats Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2014 5:33:00 AM

- A fun contest to participate in - thanks for the greeting, Kayod5 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arty Rico Jones

Date: 3/7/2014 11:42:00 AM

beautiful vision of the sky Anne Lisa.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 11:44:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Arty ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2014 8:38:00 AM

you picked the same visual as I did and came up with a different idea and I LOVE it. Good job with this one, and congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 8:48:00 AM

- A fun contest to participate in - thanks for the greeting, Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/7/2014 8:30:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise: Iloved the imagery of your poem. Congratulations! This my first win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 8:37:00 AM

- I have only once been on TOP of the winner list, me too - but several split 1. places - Bravo. Ralph !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2014 8:24:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 8:26:00 AM

- A fun contest to participate in, Joseph - thanks for the greeting ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 3/7/2014 8:21:00 AM

Hi Anna Lisa: a beautiful poem full of imagery. Congratulations on your win. This is my first one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 8:23:00 AM

- A fun contest to participate in - thanks for the greeting, Ralph ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/7/2014 7:17:00 AM

congrats on the win my poetic friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 7:25:00 AM

- A fun contest to participate in, Frederic - thanks for the greeting ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2014 6:30:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 6:43:00 AM

- A fun contest to participate in - thanks for the greeting, Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2014 4:53:00 AM

Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2014 6:42:00 AM

- A fun contest to participate in - thanks for the greeting, Dr. Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 3/4/2014 5:44:00 AM

Oh dreamy write dear AnneLise. This gives such a restful feeling, it brings me back to my childhood days. Good stuff!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/4/2014 8:00:00 AM

- No, you were probably one Prince .... without glass shoes :)) - Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Mustapha! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 3/4/2014 5:45:00 AM

By the way I was never a princes...lol.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/28/2014 8:14:00 AM

A splendid write my dear friend Anne Lise. I feel like I'm singing in the colorful sky while reading it. So love it and enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck in the contest! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2014 11:17:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Leonora ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/28/2014 7:17:00 AM

A beautiful, dreamy write. I felt like I was soaring through the sky with you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2014 7:30:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Monterey ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 2/27/2014 9:08:00 AM

Pretty light and I love that her umbrella is purple. For a second I thought I'd flown off my feet. love it, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/27/2014 11:28:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Kathryn ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/27/2014 2:49:00 AM

Full of hope and light, and daydreams. Very nice.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/27/2014 2:53:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Scott ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/26/2014 2:42:00 PM

Lovely poem Anne-Lise........I feel as if I am floating in the clouds!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2014 3:44:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Carrie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2014 9:59:00 AM

have a color-filled day, anne.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2014 11:18:00 AM

- Thanks :)

Tim B

Date: 2/26/2014 8:45:00 AM

Wow, great imagery Anne. Thank you for sharing this one, best of luck to you in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2014 11:18:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Tim ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Boskovski

Date: 2/25/2014 10:55:00 PM

Oh this is a beautiful poem, right down to the core! I feel it! Nice write Anne! great poem :) xoxo Good luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2014 1:50:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Chris ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Emily Legel

Date: 2/25/2014 4:30:00 PM

This is beautiful. Thank you for commenting on my poem. I can't wait to read more.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2014 1:49:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Emily ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 2/25/2014 3:23:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Anne..Nice work!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2014 1:48:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Ken ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/25/2014 11:15:00 AM

Pls keep one of these rainbow umbrellas for mr sweet lady.So so magical this is..Somehow I yearn to be up there amongst thosr colours.Lovely!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2014 11:29:00 AM

- You are welcome, Charmaine ! - Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Marzia Hasan

Date: 2/25/2014 11:10:00 AM

such a beautiful and refreshing penning....i loved the vivid and vivacious imagery employed...way to go!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2014 11:29:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Marzia ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/25/2014 9:18:00 AM

ohh, thank you, anne... may tuesday lift you higher.. huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2014 10:14:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason

Date: 2/25/2014 8:42:00 AM

great visuals. well done A-L. warm thoughts, Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2014 8:50:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Ralph ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2014 7:27:00 AM

I haven't checked out the contest but this one reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your comments encourage..Ahh!! To float on a purple umbrella and play with the rainbow..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2014 8:17:00 AM

- Sounds like fun playing on the rainbow....- Thanks for the nice and positive visit - greatly appreciate your words, Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)